Reviews from

The Corridors of My Mind

Behind each door lies an emotion, waiting to become a story.

10 total reviews 
Comment from Ric Myworld
Exceptional
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Carol, my dear, you touch my heart with everything you write. The funny, sad, and now the inspirational. So many people start writing because of tragedy, loss, or loneliness, especially as a child. And Most, never realize how much they can touch another person's heart and life to make a difference. I new you were a special prize after reading your post that I stumbled across. I've tried not to miss one since. Congratulations on the win!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
    You are so very very kind my friend. You brought tears to my eyes as I was beginning to doubt my place on this site and this morning my charming friend lifted my spirits. Your friendship is precious! I can always depend on finding a smile with you. Sending a big one back today! Have a great day!
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you so much for sharing from the various seasons of your life and how writing was a source of therapy, comfort, and a means to bring others joy! Now I'm distressed about your second son and wondered what happened and at the same time scared to find out.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much for your kind review. My life has been a rocky road but my faith has always lead me through the darkness and into the light. Tragedy has made me a survivor - a fighter for my family. Tragedy has taught me to appreciate the small blessings. Writing has given me the flashlight to walk these roads.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Heart-felt/warming/breaking. Eloquent and profound--I can relate to all the reasons--except, luckily for me--to the loss of a child--re fanstory--my sentiments exactly! This may well be a winner!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for your kindness and support. It's so true that without Fanstory and my new friends I am not sure who I would lean upon for strength. I truly appreciate everyone. And my writing has always been my doorway to God, to sanity and to the world in general.
Comment from DonandVicki
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Your essay brought out a lot of good points as to why we write. I have had some of the same feelings. I write for myself as well, yet it is wonderful to get helpful feedback.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Thank you - It's difficult to narrow down specifically why we write. I guess, it's a free and open door to allowing us to open whatever doorway we are passing through whether it be reality or our imagination.
Comment from Lyn Peters
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I wish I had many, many more stars to award The Corridors of My Mind. You take your reader on such a journey, in such a short time. Thank you for sharing your life through your writing. I would like to look for more of your work in the future... Wishing you good health and fulfillment in your writing.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your many generous and kind words concerning my writing. I am glad you enjoyed it. I would be honored if you continued to read my stories and we shared a friendship here on FanStory.
reply by Lyn Peters on 31-Jan-2021
    It would be my pleasure. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment from Judy Lawless
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You have written a very meaningful story about why you write, one that I'm sure many of us can relate to. I for one have found writing to be my only escape in times of sorrow or tragedy, even if it often gets written only to my journal. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    When I was younger, it all was just me, God and the journal. I didn't share my inner feelings. I feel so blessed that now others understand and can offer me support and prayers. Thank you for your thoughts and wishes.
Comment from Justin Chopin
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Well done. Thought your story was very interesting and I can relate with wanting to write to vent out the pains and the sorrows that this life can sometimes offer us. You have a great narrative voice. Keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Justin, I thank you for taking the time to read my contest entry and for all the kind comments. May you too find kinship with your readers as you write and express yourself. Smiles to you!
reply by Justin Chopin on 31-Jan-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Thank you for sharing your story with us. Truly you have found your writing to be what you needed at different times of tragedy and sorrow in your life. Like you, reading was an escape when I was a child and a love for literature instills a desire in our hearts to also write. Very well written.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much Anne. I appreciate your kindness and friendship especially at this time. As a child, it was my only way of voicing my emotions and as I grow older, once again it is my outlet as well. Sending you a smile and blessings for a great day!
reply by Anne Johnston on 31-Jan-2021
    You are welcome
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Excellent story for the Why do I Write contest! Best wishes for the win!
It is very well written and from the heart;-)

Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Melodie, Thank you for your kind words and for the prayers for my family. I appreciate your support and fellowship. Smiles to you!
reply by Melodie Michelle on 02-Feb-2021
    ;-)
Comment from RetroStarfish
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This is a wonderfully written essay on why you write.
I like the way you've bookended the whole piece by beginning with why, moving on to your life experiences, and ending with the return to why you write.
I truly hope this exercise brings you some comfort. And, please, keep on writing!

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your kind words and for enjoying my contest entry. When I was young, writing became my voice between me and my journal. As I grow old, writing once again proves to be my outlet of support. Thank you again and God bless.