Serenity
Nighttime offers a special kind of calm...9 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
congratulations on winning second place. When a person is entering poetry contests, you never know what the placing will be.....this is a gorgeous entry for a contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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congratulations on winning second place. When a person is entering poetry contests, you never know what the placing will be.....this is a gorgeous entry for a contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review on this one, Rosemary! ;) Yvette
Comment from jaded831
Your poem gave me a peaceful feeling, something we need these days. The picture added to the experience. Together they are awesome, and create quite a mental picture, the reader can take with them and reflect all day.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Your poem gave me a peaceful feeling, something we need these days. The picture added to the experience. Together they are awesome, and create quite a mental picture, the reader can take with them and reflect all day.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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So glad to have gifted you with some peace for the day... may it continue into the coming week! Thanks for stopping by!
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is an interesting picture you have choosen to accompany this piece. There is a calmness to this poem. As is you are floating down the river at night just watching the stars.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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That is an interesting picture you have choosen to accompany this piece. There is a calmness to this poem. As is you are floating down the river at night just watching the stars.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your review, Mia - have a great weekend!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Write a 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
I like your topic. Good imagery of the peaceful night.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Write a 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
I like your topic. Good imagery of the peaceful night.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Very peaceful poem with equally peaceful artwork! I like the way you used the French word for "black" instead of black. It sounds so much more poetic.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Very peaceful poem with equally peaceful artwork! I like the way you used the French word for "black" instead of black. It sounds so much more poetic.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from donette1914
simply beautiful
very well written and ones are drawn in with your words
very cleaver story line and a photo that go's perfect.
I hope for the best in the contest
thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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simply beautiful
very well written and ones are drawn in with your words
very cleaver story line and a photo that go's perfect.
I hope for the best in the contest
thank you for sharing
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
What a lovely 3-5-3. So much said in so few words. And it lived up to its title. The picture is perfect as well. Good luck in the contest.
Happy writing!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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What a lovely 3-5-3. So much said in so few words. And it lived up to its title. The picture is perfect as well. Good luck in the contest.
Happy writing!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Carol Clark2
Your words are so peace-provoking in this 3-5-3 poem. The picture, I confess, evokes a sense of anxiety in me, rather than serenity. Perhaps it's the mix of colors throughout. I like the words of your second line best. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Your words are so peace-provoking in this 3-5-3 poem. The picture, I confess, evokes a sense of anxiety in me, rather than serenity. Perhaps it's the mix of colors throughout. I like the words of your second line best. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I sometimes welcome the night for peace and sleep to refresh and renew, this is what your words did here, the night is for restful rejuvenation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I sometimes welcome the night for peace and sleep to refresh and renew, this is what your words did here, the night is for restful rejuvenation, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much!
