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Unity

3/5/3 Contest Entry

12 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 3-5-3, Unity, has the right set up and looks to God for the power to bring all things and all like-minded, good-hearted people together.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. Have a nice day.

    Gypsy Hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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I like your image and poem. It is hard to sometimes enter contests, but we must try to do our best. I think the picture of Jesus is outstanding. He is the winner in our life.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Yeah, I didn't do well in the contest. It's usually a hit or miss for me. Thank you for the review :)
reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 31-Jan-2021
    me either!
Comment from jaded831
Exceptional
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I believe without unity we can't accomplish anything. Republicans and democrats need to work together for the common good. We must keep praying for a better tomorrow. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. :)

    Thank you very much for the six stars!
Comment from Mia Twysted
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"Unity," if only we could have more of this. If we could all feel that love this piece speaks of and spread it around. Change the world, make it better.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. :)

Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Aaaah... the faith of the strong heart - would that all could accept! ;) A wonderful offering here for the 3-5-3 today -- thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. :)

Comment from pome lover
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Certainly lovely and hopeful words, if only mankind would take them to heart, "what a wonderful world it would be."
Very heartfelt poem with inspiring message and accompanying picture.
Best wishes in the contest.
pome lover

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a Beautifully written 3-5-3 poem. Divine love binds us together. Unity. Nicely done. Nice photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from DonandVicki
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The short poem packs a lot of love and wisdom. I like the reference to Bob Marley song which is a musical poem. The image, poem and Bob's song make a nice combination.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from zanya
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The words one can use here are few yet this poem succeeds in saying so much within those restrictions -Unity in the truest sense of the term - how can we attain it ?

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for your review and kind words. Maybe through kindness but I realize it's not easy. Smiles are contagious maybe kindness is too.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You contest entry plus words pair nicely, Mystery Author. Good job with the correct syllable count per line. Your message is loud and clear and appropriate.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
    Thank you very much for your review and kind words.