Riding the Wave
3.5.3 poem10 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is a beautiful picture. One of those things that you see and have to stop to take a picutre with. It would be easy to ride the wave when it is not moving. However, it doesn't give you the same experience.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
That is a beautiful picture. One of those things that you see and have to stop to take a picutre with. It would be easy to ride the wave when it is not moving. However, it doesn't give you the same experience.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Wave Rock really is a sight.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Mystery Poet!
You have 2 votes now .
I think this is a cool entry ..
I liked the humour behind your words.
Wave's Rock is an stunning natural formation!
Keep safe!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
Ciao Mystery Poet!
You have 2 votes now .
I think this is a cool entry ..
I liked the humour behind your words.
Wave's Rock is an stunning natural formation!
Keep safe!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thanks for the review and your vote. Both are appreciated.
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You are welcomed..! ( biggrin)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Always easier when you can't get wet! ;) :) A wonderful offering here for the 3-5-3 today -- thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
LOL!! Always easier when you can't get wet! ;) :) A wonderful offering here for the 3-5-3 today -- thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Write a 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
I like your topic about waves.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Write a 3-5-3 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation.
I like your topic about waves.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Omar sb
Good illustration & message!
Those two aspects evoked me to read up on flared slopes.
Although it does not look easy riding those still formations for a clumsy non-rider like me; it sure looks fun!
Thanks for sharing.
Best of luck in the Contest!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
Good illustration & message!
Those two aspects evoked me to read up on flared slopes.
Although it does not look easy riding those still formations for a clumsy non-rider like me; it sure looks fun!
Thanks for sharing.
Best of luck in the Contest!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Like you I am not a surfer but I have been to Wave Rock and it is fun to pretend.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 3-5-3 poem speaks confidently how easy it is wave riding when the wave is still in Hyden; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
This 3-5-3 poem speaks confidently how easy it is wave riding when the wave is still in Hyden; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Very cool poem, and wow, what a photo. It's difficult to tell at first that's not actually a wave. I see this is an entry into the 3-5-3. All the best of luck to you!!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
Very cool poem, and wow, what a photo. It's difficult to tell at first that's not actually a wave. I see this is an entry into the 3-5-3. All the best of luck to you!!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation; thanks
for sharing about it.
-The syllable count is
good along with the topic.
-Good description of
wave riding, and how
it can be easy!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
-Nice image and
presentation; thanks
for sharing about it.
-The syllable count is
good along with the topic.
-Good description of
wave riding, and how
it can be easy!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. It's easy with a little imagination.
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You are welcome; I imagine it is!
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really good i do not surf but theirs something called zup board that gets pulled behind the boat if that counts but as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
this is really good i do not surf but theirs something called zup board that gets pulled behind the boat if that counts but as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Those zup boards sound like fun
Comment from Leann DS
Your poem fit the syllable count and has a clear idea with only a few words. Plus, it was funny! many things are much simpler when nothing is happening, but they are also kind of boring. Just a random thought there... Well done, and hugs to you.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
Your poem fit the syllable count and has a clear idea with only a few words. Plus, it was funny! many things are much simpler when nothing is happening, but they are also kind of boring. Just a random thought there... Well done, and hugs to you.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.