Comment from 4theloveoftrees

Excellent

I like the graphic, if we could always exhale the bullshit! I really enjoyed that this dialogue is the same person in different roles, I've done something similar in the past! This is great, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021

Comment from estory

Excellent

Some nice little moments in here...I liked the line about writing a book, it really is a great jab for this site. All the ideas for living on the fly, collecting wellfare, getting food from the food bank, really speak to the new mentality of scamming the system. estory

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. So he's contributing to the rent using the stolen tip jar money? I think that could be a problem. Thanks for another fun episode. I do hope that Prince Gamlet will find a job that he's good at!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Always witty and wry!

I mentioned these two a few times--You forgot to fix :

1)Kaleidoscope with a K
2)plays BOTH (vs all) characters

maybe I will get INSPIRED

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021

Comment from Eddy Fidelis

Excellent

I would like to read the entire story. The struggle between good and evil within us. I like how you personalize the concept. Let's see who will win. Kudos for a nice piece

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

I'm sorry, Iza, but I couldn't make heads nor tails of this play. It had something to do with acting to make money for rent, but I don't understand it in the broader context of what went before. It's part of a book. I can see that. I guess I'd want to know if it follows organically from the previous chapter?

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021

yes it does, so sorry

reply by Jay Squires on 28-Jan-2021

No, no apology needed, but I would suggest a short paragraph summary of the previous chapter.