Comment from Dr. Nad

Exceptional

I know this was a sensitive writing for you. So soon after inauguration we all want to give the new president The benefit of the doubt. You, much to your credit, prove to be right on it from the start. I wish that you had been proven wrong when this poem is written. However, you have been proven right! Great job of writing and a great job of maintaining objectivity while calling a spade a spade. Thanks for sharing, embrace the love from above.

 Comment Written 22-May-2021

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reply by the author on 22-May-2021

Thank you for reading my poem and for your insightful comments. I appreciate both.

reply by Dr. Nad on 29-May-2021

You are so very welcome. Sorry to be so late in response.

Comment from hager

Exceptional

I totally agree.. don't get me started... What a cheat, creeper, who holds nothing good for you or me.... as I said don't get me started... and he and his group of Backwards leaning thinking will destroy anyone in their path... Hope still resides as we pray... each and throughout our days... till the real winner speaks again.... hager

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks for reading and for being a kindred spirit. I really fear for our country, especially where foreign policy is concerned. Biden doesn't even treat the national guard right, has no respect for the military. Any chance Trump will run next time? I pray for it.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This kyrielle, Come On Man, has the proper formatting and finds all the actions of the new President that seem foolish in the current season of disease, joblessness, and lack of the reality show drama.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021

Thanks for reviewing my poem, I'm glad this resonated with you. :)

Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel

Excellent

This is a great poem and commentary on the politics of the day in the United States! I was going to try and pick out my favorite lines, but I like the whole thing, so I can't! LOL Please keep writing and telling the truth.
Thank you for sharing.
Susan

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021

Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it. I notice you gave me three stars...and this poem has garnered a lot of negative reviews because of it's content. But if you have any suggestions on how it make it better, I'd appreciate it. I stand by my views, however, that won't change. Did you happen to see Biden on Facebook talking about the vaccine distribution? I fear for this country, watch the video and you will see why. Thanks for reading. :)

reply by Susan Louise Gabriel on 31-Jan-2021

Oh I must have made a mistake when selecting the rating!! Or else some Democrat came along behind me and changed the rating! I just tried to change it to 6 stars, which is what I thought I'd given you in the first place, but the six star rating doesn't show up! And I haven't used any of them yet for this week.

reply by Susan Louise Gabriel on 31-Jan-2021

please check and let me know whether it came up as three stars again.

reply by Susan Louise Gabriel on 31-Jan-2021

I think I'll write to Tom and find out why I can't select six stars and what might've happened.

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021

Thank you for changing the rating..it really means a lot to me. :)

reply by Susan Louise Gabriel on 31-Jan-2021

I will see what I can do to make it 6 - I wrote to Tom - hopefully he will somehow be able to reset my review so I can do it over and give it the 6 stars I intended...
personally, I think Biden was behind it.
LOL

reply by Susan Louise Gabriel on 01-Feb-2021

I received a message back from Tom and he said it's not possible to change the rating when it's a revision. So I made you a "buddy" so I'll be notified of your next poem post. That way I can give that poem six stars to replace the six-star rating I can't give to "C'mon Man" -- great title, by the way! LOL

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Your title caught my attention first. Your poem I tend to agree with, and I am conservative. Apparently others on this site are a tad less likely to enjoy it, so don't be surprised. Good work.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021

I'm not surprised by the negativity or that I lost in the contest, but I appreciate your reading my poem and for your thoughtful comments. If you can find it, you should watch Biden on Facebook talking about vaccine distribution....I'm scared for this country. Thanks again for reading. :)

Comment from Taurus the Elder

Excellent

Very good. Well some of us knew it was coming if the democrats won. So I guess we get ready for 12 years of socialism, because after Biden we
get 8 years of Harris. Great job, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021

If Biden lasts that long. If you can find it on Facebook, watch the video of Biden talking about the vaccine distribution. It's scary and my daughter who's an RN said it almost seemed like he was going to have a stroke. Thanks again for reading.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hi. Your political theme is an apt choice and so very current to our modern day.
Your poem is very good and the repetitive line underpins the entire theme of your verse. I really like it and know you will do well. Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021

Thank you for this positive review. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

A very apt poem delineating the stupidity of the new far-left administration. Any sane person would be using their common sense at this time. I don't believe there is any common sense available in that group.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021

I agree and I'm so glad you do as well. A few of my reviews have been quite negative, not because of my poem but it's content... but I appreciate all points of view. :) Thank you for this positive review. :)

reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 31-Jan-2021

I can understand the negativity. Has anyone muted you? I've been muted by two. The Democrats have been blinded and I do mean blinded, by their quest for power. They will stop at nothing.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Average

Hello anonymous

Okay entry for the
Write a Kyrielle writing prompt poetry contest. Okay quatrains that rhyme. You followed the rules with little substance.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I see that you gave me an average rating...do you have any suggestions for improvement? I would be interested in your imput.

Comment from WriterHeather

Excellent

Very well written peice that follows the rules of the contest nicely. You are very good at these political poems! Thanks for sharing! I always enjoy your work

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021

Thank you for this terrific review, I'm so thankful for all those who read my work. :)