Jealous Suspicion
The evils of uncontrolled jealousy51 total reviews
Comment from Vanna1
A little bumpy on the flow in the third stanza. You have a good presentation and rhyme. I use unsplash.com as well. I like your message it is very realistic. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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A little bumpy on the flow in the third stanza. You have a good presentation and rhyme. I use unsplash.com as well. I like your message it is very realistic. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Vanna. I will not even ask the obvious question. I am sure that you are not turning over letters on a particular TV game show.
Comment from Carlos' girl
I like this poem very much and I really love the authors notes. I've never understood a love relationship with jealousy. It seems to me the jealous person needs to work on themselves and their self esteem or insecurity issues instead of accusing their partner. Its so immature and egotistical.
Anyway, great poem, I enjoyed it
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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I like this poem very much and I really love the authors notes. I've never understood a love relationship with jealousy. It seems to me the jealous person needs to work on themselves and their self esteem or insecurity issues instead of accusing their partner. Its so immature and egotistical.
Anyway, great poem, I enjoyed it
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much. You words are encouraging and uplifting as well.
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Very glad you liked my review
Comment from Iza Deleanu
"
I do not expect you to cheat.
Jealous suspicion I must defeat.
This love is a love that I eagerly sought.
I must not harbor another jealous thought." Jealously it's a hard rock to carry on your chest.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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"
I do not expect you to cheat.
Jealous suspicion I must defeat.
This love is a love that I eagerly sought.
I must not harbor another jealous thought." Jealously it's a hard rock to carry on your chest.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you. Your words ring true and resonate loud and clear.
Comment from L. Kalere
Easier said than done. I suppose it's part of the human condition to be jealous, even if we pretend we're not. Nice pace, nice rhyme.
Congratulations on a job well done.
Linda
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Easier said than done. I suppose it's part of the human condition to be jealous, even if we pretend we're not. Nice pace, nice rhyme.
Congratulations on a job well done.
Linda
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Linda. I appreciate the fine comments.
Comment from QC Poet
I almost gave this one six stars because I was on the accused end of this suspicion after many years I tired and said what the heck I'm being accused anyway. The accusations started after being married and working night shift for 5 years but I weakened after hearing it for another 10 years. Now and still married for another 30 years (43) we still talk about how disruptive it was. Thank you for Sharing your Excellent poem / story.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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I almost gave this one six stars because I was on the accused end of this suspicion after many years I tired and said what the heck I'm being accused anyway. The accusations started after being married and working night shift for 5 years but I weakened after hearing it for another 10 years. Now and still married for another 30 years (43) we still talk about how disruptive it was. Thank you for Sharing your Excellent poem / story.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you. I am pleased that you were able to work things out.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Great poem! How many times young love worries about if their love is true. Scared that they might find someone new. I guess it's normal to worry. I love the rhythm and the rhyme. It reads smoothly. Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Great poem! How many times young love worries about if their love is true. Scared that they might find someone new. I guess it's normal to worry. I love the rhythm and the rhyme. It reads smoothly. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Patty. I enjoyed your poetic response.
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right about jealousy. Your poem makes a valid point. It is one's choice. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery with a clear message.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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You are right about jealousy. Your poem makes a valid point. It is one's choice. Your lines flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery with a clear message.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you Jan, I appreciate your supportive remarks.
Comment from DonandVicki
When I was young I had a hell of a time with unwarranted jealousy. I later learned the hard way that jealousy is just a lack of confidence in oneself. I enjoyed the flow, meaning and rhyme.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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When I was young I had a hell of a time with unwarranted jealousy. I later learned the hard way that jealousy is just a lack of confidence in oneself. I enjoyed the flow, meaning and rhyme.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much. Your comments are uplifting and encouraging.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Very nicely written poem. It has a Great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful photo to go with your words. Yes jealously can be a bad thing if not kept under control. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This is a Very nicely written poem. It has a Great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful photo to go with your words. Yes jealously can be a bad thing if not kept under control. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate your support.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello NOMI338,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme ending on the positive note.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hello NOMI338,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme ending on the positive note.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Your kind and supportive comments lift my spirits completely.
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Nomi338, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
