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By The Sea

I love walking on the beach looking for treasures

7 total reviews 
Comment from Boogienights
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This is lovely, a wonderfully descriptive poem about the beach. I love water, my home is next to the greatest of the great lakes..Superior, and there is no place on Earth as beautiful. I love your poem, best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
    Thank you it must be very beautiful to live by the lake 🙂also
Comment from June Sargent
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Very refreshing and romantic piece. You e painted a beautiful scenario of a living couple enjoying the wonders of the sea - as well as each other's company. Nice entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you
Comment from Julie Sandy
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Really enjoyed reading this poem I also love the beach, I liked the repeated use of the ending line. It described all the beautiful things about the beach.
Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you 🙂
Comment from Earl Corp
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This is an excellent entry into the Kyrelle poetry contest. It is very descriptive, rhymes, makes sense, and gives you the sense that you are there. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
    Thank you
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Joanne,
I'm glad I found this poem!
I remember my first time I went to an ocean. I was only 4 years old and our family went to New Jersey. I remember the clean, salty smell of the sand ,
The tumbling waves and finding beautiful seashells to collect. I also remember to my dismay, my feet had a perpetual layer of sand on them no matter how many times I washed them off in the ocean and walked through the sand to go home and returned to the ocean one last time to rid my feet of that sand. Lol.
You've written an excellent kyrielle poem, Joanne.
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
    Thank you Cindy that?s my very first time I?ve written a poem of this type.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
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Very nice! I wasn't brave enough to conquer the Kyrielle poem, but you did a great job. I see you have entered it into the contest. Good luck with that!

Happy writing!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
    Thank you actually it?s the first one I?ve ever written. I wasn?t sure if I?d attempt it or not.
Comment from Melissa Heilig
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I love the rhyming pattern with the repetition of "feeling happy and carefree". The visuals it provided were great & made me want to flee my winter blues.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
    Thank you