Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

The whole island and the one place he ends up trying to escape the traffic and he ends up here. I knew you planned to get him into trouble but he just moves right into it with stopping to think. I hope you don't let him suffer too much.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Thank you again Beth for reading another chapter and for the very nice review. I think there are only a few more chapters to go, so...I don't think Scott will suffer that much. He is about to have a rude awakening though.
Please stay with the novel to the end, to see how things end, and how the puzzle pieces fit together.
Dick

Comment from GE Parson

Excellent

Mr. Dick,
Very interesting story, You made it spell binding by all the mystery parts; also
your depiction of each place to which you
scootered. Looking forward to how you
end this. Your friend, Jerry

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Thank you Jerry for reading this chapter and for the very nice review. Only a few more chapters to close this novel out, so I hope you see where it goes. Thanks again for the review and the friendship.
Dick

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

The author is a good story teller and makes it easy to follow. The chasing scene was well written. It makes the story more interesting to follow.

The breakfast scene is a good opening showing the mood of the author and what he was thinking then.

Good writing. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021

Thank you Chan for reading this story and for the very nice review.
Thanks for sharing what you liked about this chapter. I might recommend reading the Prologue to get a better idea of who is being the kidnappings.
Thanks again,
Dick