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A kryielle for kiddies

4 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh those days seem like forever ago now... :) A great kyrielle for the contest today as there are so many of different flavors -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
    I never heard of that type of poem before, so my interpretation was a little different than many of the others. But I had a great time writing it! Thank you for your encouraging words and for your review. Hugs.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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I like how you brought awareness to the senses. I may be presuming something here, but you may be divulging your era. I remember one of our feats in fourth grade was to sneak a fingerful of the yummy white paste in the jar with a lid easily removed. I enjoyed this.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
    I beg your pardon? But my granddaughters still use paste! Yummy! 😉 thank you for your kind review and comment. Hugs.
reply by Liz O'Neill on 27-Jan-2021
    lol
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
Comment from DonandVicki
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Your poem took me back to the day I started first grade. I could smell the smells and remember some of the faces. Your poem Is ment for children and adults alike.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your kind comments and review. I remember always being so nervous and excited to go back to school. And the smell of paper? That is such a unique smell that always reminds me of my elementary school days. thanks again. Hugs.
Comment from zanya
Exceptional
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It's a delightful Kryielle for kids filled with all the wonder and anticipation of going to school - and learning about the world and life around us in all its various shape and forms -superb

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
    Thank you so much for your generous rating and kind words in your review. They are appreciated. I had a lot of fun remembering back to my school days. Hugs.