Morning Dew Diamonds
5/7/5 Autumn Haiku4 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
in spiderweb by the barn --
mesmerizing trap
A beautiful death trap easily catches us, and in this instance, we almost thank the spider for the warnings about life's dangers.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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in spiderweb by the barn --
mesmerizing trap
A beautiful death trap easily catches us, and in this instance, we almost thank the spider for the warnings about life's dangers.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
Those lil spiders can spin some gorgeous webs, but oh yes, what a trap they weave.
Excellent haiku Gypsy, and always a pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Those lil spiders can spin some gorgeous webs, but oh yes, what a trap they weave.
Excellent haiku Gypsy, and always a pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Gloria. It's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your time and feedback. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It charmed me immediately with such a lovely image you painted in words. Then I remembered shingling a barn and realized one word doesn't work.
There is no dew inside a barn, but lots of spiderwebs were on the barn. Just being a little picky. Good luck with this
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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It charmed me immediately with such a lovely image you painted in words. Then I remembered shingling a barn and realized one word doesn't work.
There is no dew inside a barn, but lots of spiderwebs were on the barn. Just being a little picky. Good luck with this
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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It's outside the barn...I should make it clear
Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate your time and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Scary! That picture is giving me the heebie-jeebies. I guess we can be lured by beauty and get in a terrible trap. But I would think the pretty dewdrops on a web would give the spider's web away.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Scary! That picture is giving me the heebie-jeebies. I guess we can be lured by beauty and get in a terrible trap. But I would think the pretty dewdrops on a web would give the spider's web away.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my work. Have a nice day or night.
Gypsy
