The Magic Fountain
Up on Tower Mountain, lies...22 total reviews
Comment from AnnieDawn
This is a wonderful fantasy story poem that I am sure children would love to read. It is written in a style that would be fantasy enough to capture their attention but not so far out that it would keep parents from letting them read it. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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This is a wonderful fantasy story poem that I am sure children would love to read. It is written in a style that would be fantasy enough to capture their attention but not so far out that it would keep parents from letting them read it. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you for that wonderful praise, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Very cool. That is most definitely an Epic Fantasy Story Poem. Good luck in the contest
My favorite lines:
With sword drawn Greyson bravely faced his foe,
the claws raked deep, later on, his scars would show.
His blows rained down, and still, the monster raged.
Though weakened, Greyson fought, he was unfazed.
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Very cool. That is most definitely an Epic Fantasy Story Poem. Good luck in the contest
My favorite lines:
With sword drawn Greyson bravely faced his foe,
the claws raked deep, later on, his scars would show.
His blows rained down, and still, the monster raged.
Though weakened, Greyson fought, he was unfazed.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you, I really appreciate you reading my poem. :)
