The Magic Fountain
Up on Tower Mountain, lies...22 total reviews
Comment from WriterHeather
This is an amazing epic poem! It has everything I'm looking for in an adventure! And I love that you had a brother/sister relationship instead of a typical prince and princess! Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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This is an amazing epic poem! It has everything I'm looking for in an adventure! And I love that you had a brother/sister relationship instead of a typical prince and princess! Well done!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this wonderfully insightful review and those six shining stars. :)
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Very good keep up the good work I enjoyed the read stay motivated and dedicated once again this is a good read thank you for sharing and have a blessed day
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Very good keep up the good work I enjoyed the read stay motivated and dedicated once again this is a good read thank you for sharing and have a blessed day
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,.
I love this!!! How fiercely your brothers love you when they aren't being annoying!! Gripping and entertaining!! Best of luck with the contest!!!
God bless!!!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Dear author,.
I love this!!! How fiercely your brothers love you when they aren't being annoying!! Gripping and entertaining!! Best of luck with the contest!!!
God bless!!!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for reading my poem....it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from LJbutterfly
WOW! As a retired early childhood educator, I would have loved to read this creative and captivating story in rhyme to the students in my classes. They would have enjoyed it as much as I have. As a non-poet, I can't even imagine the kind of mind that can create such magnificence. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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WOW! As a retired early childhood educator, I would have loved to read this creative and captivating story in rhyme to the students in my classes. They would have enjoyed it as much as I have. As a non-poet, I can't even imagine the kind of mind that can create such magnificence. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this generous review, I'm delighted that you liked it. It really means a lot to me. :)
Comment from JLR
BoogieNights, your Quintets with smooth ending rhyming couplets unfold a masterful children's story that flows with a very strong narrative. Your graphic is the perfect selection to compliment your poem. Kudos!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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BoogieNights, your Quintets with smooth ending rhyming couplets unfold a masterful children's story that flows with a very strong narrative. Your graphic is the perfect selection to compliment your poem. Kudos!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it's always appreciated. :)
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Bravo! This is a magical, beautiful, touching, fantastic and imaginative epic poem. Congratulations on winning the contest, and I can certainly understand why it won. This belongs in some kind of an anthology of poetry, which I believe would appeal to children of all ages! And I'm sorry that I'm out of sixes, because it is deserving of it.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Bravo! This is a magical, beautiful, touching, fantastic and imaginative epic poem. Congratulations on winning the contest, and I can certainly understand why it won. This belongs in some kind of an anthology of poetry, which I believe would appeal to children of all ages! And I'm sorry that I'm out of sixes, because it is deserving of it.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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That is so kind of you to say, thank you . It means a lot to me, and I'm so glad you liked it. :)
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You're very welcome, Boogienights. May God bless you. Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a wonderfully written story in a poem. Whenever there are elves, towers and evil sorcerers I always know that I'm in for a good read.
Congratulations on your well deserved win and thank goodness that Emmaline is no longer under the spell of a sorcerer.
Gloria
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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This is a wonderfully written story in a poem. Whenever there are elves, towers and evil sorcerers I always know that I'm in for a good read.
Congratulations on your well deserved win and thank goodness that Emmaline is no longer under the spell of a sorcerer.
Gloria
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Thank you for such a wonderful review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This epic poem, The Magic Fountain, keeps me following Greyson's quest to help his sister recover from her curse of sleep. The adventure was fun to follow and a great finish.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This epic poem, The Magic Fountain, keeps me following Greyson's quest to help his sister recover from her curse of sleep. The adventure was fun to follow and a great finish.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun fantastical story and I enjoyed the fantasy here as you created an epic poem, your meter is a bit uneven in places, especially in the last line, but I enjoyed the journey, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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A fun fantastical story and I enjoyed the fantasy here as you created an epic poem, your meter is a bit uneven in places, especially in the last line, but I enjoyed the journey, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, I look forward to your reviews. :)
Comment from Rosalie Lawrence
What an exciting adventure and it didn't take you six volumes and 600,000 adjectives to spin an enchanting tale of brotherly devotion, red-eyed monsters, a family curse and a happy ending. Nice rhyming scheme. Moves the tale along very nicely. Write on, Sir Knight.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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What an exciting adventure and it didn't take you six volumes and 600,000 adjectives to spin an enchanting tale of brotherly devotion, red-eyed monsters, a family curse and a happy ending. Nice rhyming scheme. Moves the tale along very nicely. Write on, Sir Knight.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. :)
