God And Man
A Spiritual Poem; Contest Over; Edited Today119 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This verse got me to thinking about how God saves us from sin. i was a bit confused with the chosen artwork and was hoping for a little note to explain it. :). Good luck in the 4 line poem!!
Melissa
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This verse got me to thinking about how God saves us from sin. i was a bit confused with the chosen artwork and was hoping for a little note to explain it. :). Good luck in the 4 line poem!!
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork
and presentation, Al Creator.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective opening lines
-The next one offers
a suggestion if you
choose to take it.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice artwork
and presentation, Al Creator.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective opening lines
-The next one offers
a suggestion if you
choose to take it.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I have no more stars to give.
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I have no more stars to give.
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem,they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first word to the last.
This is what I call a food for thought poem.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
An interesting spiritual poem. You sure packed volumes in these four lines. Great imagery and visuals and I love your presentation and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
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An interesting spiritual poem. You sure packed volumes in these four lines. Great imagery and visuals and I love your presentation and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from Melodie Michelle
You have a great winter in the four line poetry contest! Good luck on the win;-)
Thank you so very much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
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You have a great winter in the four line poetry contest! Good luck on the win;-)
Thank you so very much for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice work up and presentation for this it is very beautiful.God forgives all of all their sins no matter who you pray to.a go is forgiving. The
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Nice work up and presentation for this it is very beautiful.God forgives all of all their sins no matter who you pray to.a go is forgiving. The
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Intriguing and refreshing take--GODS--plural will provoke many on this site--not me!--good for you--I hadn't realized that this was acrostic until I saw the mention by another reviewer!
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Intriguing and refreshing take--GODS--plural will provoke many on this site--not me!--good for you--I hadn't realized that this was acrostic until I saw the mention by another reviewer!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The picture is a good choice. I agree with the author that "God, Only knows man's sin." Sinners should pray for forgiveness.
The advice from the poem is good: "So confess God to save or punish."
Happy writing.
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The picture is a good choice. I agree with the author that "God, Only knows man's sin." Sinners should pray for forgiveness.
The advice from the poem is good: "So confess God to save or punish."
Happy writing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
Comment from l.raven
Hi Alcreator, that's so true my sweet friend...
God will be the one who will judge our sins...
live as close to His words as you can...
he will forgive the faithful...
I love your poem...and the picture...perfect...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Alcreator, that's so true my sweet friend...
God will be the one who will judge our sins...
live as close to His words as you can...
he will forgive the faithful...
I love your poem...and the picture...perfect...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'God and Man', is an exceptionally well written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest!
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'God and Man', is an exceptionally well written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
