God And Man
A Spiritual Poem; Contest Over; Edited Today119 total reviews
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully guiding us to have an unflinching faith in God:
Let's live and act as we like, but just confess and leave the rest for Him to decide.
Superb!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully guiding us to have an unflinching faith in God:
Let's live and act as we like, but just confess and leave the rest for Him to decide.
Superb!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Your poem fulfills the syllabic requirements well. You give us an interesting form as you made it also acrostic and the picture is a stunning one. I read in your poem both a prayer and a call to confess our sins to God Who is willing to forgive because of Jesus' payment for us.
Best wishes in the contest!
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Your poem fulfills the syllabic requirements well. You give us an interesting form as you made it also acrostic and the picture is a stunning one. I read in your poem both a prayer and a call to confess our sins to God Who is willing to forgive because of Jesus' payment for us.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a very effective short acrostic poem, that sets us all to think about the differences between God and Gods in religion (yes I know you told us not to hook the poem up to any specific religion, but just the writing of that makes it hard to do).
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This is a very effective short acrostic poem, that sets us all to think about the differences between God and Gods in religion (yes I know you told us not to hook the poem up to any specific religion, but just the writing of that makes it hard to do).
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
Good job! Well, God knows our every sin even without us telling him. So, if you live as you wish ya gotta watch out because you won't have to confess. He'll know it. I love the picture. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
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Good job! Well, God knows our every sin even without us telling him. So, if you live as you wish ya gotta watch out because you won't have to confess. He'll know it. I love the picture. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent spiritual poem written in just four lines. You pack a lot in those lines my friend. Martin Luther once said, "Love God with all your heart and do as you wish". You wonderful poem reminded me of those words.
Well done.
Blessings.
Janet
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Excellent spiritual poem written in just four lines. You pack a lot in those lines my friend. Martin Luther once said, "Love God with all your heart and do as you wish". You wonderful poem reminded me of those words.
Well done.
Blessings.
Janet
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello ALCREATOR LITT DEAR,
This is a brilliant 4-line poem about God and Man. Yes, God knows our hearts and He knows the sins of man. I never, ever seen a photo of Jesus
or God with a Hindu. God loves everyone as your artwork displays. God will save the believers, and the non-believers can receive eternal life if they believe God is who He say, he is. This poem makes anyone think about their life and who they believe in? I don't think people should live as they wish. We are accountable for our actions per the Constitution and the law of the land. Well done. I tried not to relate this to my faith.
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Hello ALCREATOR LITT DEAR,
This is a brilliant 4-line poem about God and Man. Yes, God knows our hearts and He knows the sins of man. I never, ever seen a photo of Jesus
or God with a Hindu. God loves everyone as your artwork displays. God will save the believers, and the non-believers can receive eternal life if they believe God is who He say, he is. This poem makes anyone think about their life and who they believe in? I don't think people should live as they wish. We are accountable for our actions per the Constitution and the law of the land. Well done. I tried not to relate this to my faith.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Alcreator:
This is a wonderful, acrostic four-line poem. I love that it is also
a spiritual poem. How creative you are. I wish you good luck in
this contest. I also love the picture you chose for this poem.
Rdfrdmom2
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Alcreator:
This is a wonderful, acrostic four-line poem. I love that it is also
a spiritual poem. How creative you are. I wish you good luck in
this contest. I also love the picture you chose for this poem.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from judiverse
Lovely artwork choice. You express that God knows man's sin. Man may do as he wishes, but it is for God to save or punish. You don't need all the commas that you use, especially the comma after the first Word, God. Best of luck in the contest. judi
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Lovely artwork choice. You express that God knows man's sin. Man may do as he wishes, but it is for God to save or punish. You don't need all the commas that you use, especially the comma after the first Word, God. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from karenina
I often think the world would be a peaceful place if we did not divide faith as a wall between belief. Makes no matter to me under what name another worships... Seems more wars are fought for religion's sake than God would prefer...or God by any other name!--Karenina
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I often think the world would be a peaceful place if we did not divide faith as a wall between belief. Makes no matter to me under what name another worships... Seems more wars are fought for religion's sake than God would prefer...or God by any other name!--Karenina
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
Comment from Reese Turner
The words and meanings are familiar, but this is the first time I have seen an image of Jesus of Nazaruth holding hands with what appears to be a Hindu goddess. Interesting. "Come, let us break Na'an together." I like it.
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The words and meanings are familiar, but this is the first time I have seen an image of Jesus of Nazaruth holding hands with what appears to be a Hindu goddess. Interesting. "Come, let us break Na'an together." I like it.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2021
