God And Man
A Spiritual Poem; Contest Over; Edited Today119 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Your poem meets the contest requirements of four lines with a 1-5-5-9 syllable structure. You speak of an all-seeing God from whom no sin is hidden. He has the power to save and the power to punish.
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Your poem meets the contest requirements of four lines with a 1-5-5-9 syllable structure. You speak of an all-seeing God from whom no sin is hidden. He has the power to save and the power to punish.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2021
Comment from palmart
You touched a subject that is very top in our human World! Gods (as you "acrostically" decided to write) are the planners of our destiny (allowing us to see what we can assume) and allow us to define our lives based in our imperfection, which is the base of our existence.
Great Poem, Great picture and Superb recognition! What else?
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You touched a subject that is very top in our human World! Gods (as you "acrostically" decided to write) are the planners of our destiny (allowing us to see what we can assume) and allow us to define our lives based in our imperfection, which is the base of our existence.
Great Poem, Great picture and Superb recognition! What else?
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from rspoet
Hello Alcreator,
You've written an excellent 1-5-5-9 poem for the contest
that many will relate to, and it has an interesting piece of art work to match.
Th message is universe, so I think it should be well received.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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Hello Alcreator,
You've written an excellent 1-5-5-9 poem for the contest
that many will relate to, and it has an interesting piece of art work to match.
Th message is universe, so I think it should be well received.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from godlucifer
man's value is man's sin. man's value is man's sin of god. in the end our confession is our value to sin. your poem was created imaginatively. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
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man's value is man's sin. man's value is man's sin of god. in the end our confession is our value to sin. your poem was created imaginatively. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A little bit of live for today in this four line poem but beware judgement day when God will be waiting. Rather than compare to religion, how about compare to Santa's naughty or nice list? Interesting poem and artwork.
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A little bit of live for today in this four line poem but beware judgement day when God will be waiting. Rather than compare to religion, how about compare to Santa's naughty or nice list? Interesting poem and artwork.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Al, it seems to me you are apologizing for the wrong thing. You asked that people Not relate to any specific religion or scripture, or do the same to the illustration you have posted; (so that this post is politically correct.)
What I find interesting is that you ask, it almost sounds like an invitation, to the reader to live however they wish! But knowing the nature of mankind, I do not think thatâ??s such a good idea, Because chaos would reign.
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Dear Al, it seems to me you are apologizing for the wrong thing. You asked that people Not relate to any specific religion or scripture, or do the same to the illustration you have posted; (so that this post is politically correct.)
What I find interesting is that you ask, it almost sounds like an invitation, to the reader to live however they wish! But knowing the nature of mankind, I do not think thatâ??s such a good idea, Because chaos would reign.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from DeboraDyess
Hi Alcreator!
It's pretty hard not to put the poem in the context of God as I understand Him, but I'm trying. :)
I love that you made an acrostic without being required to do so and that the flow of the poem is uninterrupted. Well done!
And, yes, it is up to us whether God forgives or punishes. (Sorry! I couldn't help myself! lol)
Blessings and best of luck with this one!
Debs
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Hi Alcreator!
It's pretty hard not to put the poem in the context of God as I understand Him, but I'm trying. :)
I love that you made an acrostic without being required to do so and that the flow of the poem is uninterrupted. Well done!
And, yes, it is up to us whether God forgives or punishes. (Sorry! I couldn't help myself! lol)
Blessings and best of luck with this one!
Debs
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
God has created us and expects us to behave like humans. He knows what we are up to at any point in time. So it is best we hold His hand to cross the sea of life as we have limited time at our disposal.
I liked the thoughtful poem. Good luck!
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God has created us and expects us to behave like humans. He knows what we are up to at any point in time. So it is best we hold His hand to cross the sea of life as we have limited time at our disposal.
I liked the thoughtful poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi Alcreator
Not being a religious man whatsoever it is difficult for me to comment on the message of your poem. Saying that I fully respect your views.
The best of luck in the competition.
Take care and stay safe, Pete
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Hi Alcreator
Not being a religious man whatsoever it is difficult for me to comment on the message of your poem. Saying that I fully respect your views.
The best of luck in the competition.
Take care and stay safe, Pete
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Nice! "God,/Only knows man's sin!/Do live as you wish;/So, confess, God's to save, or punish." True words. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Nice! "God,/Only knows man's sin!/Do live as you wish;/So, confess, God's to save, or punish." True words. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
