God And Man
A Spiritual Poem; Contest Over; Edited Today119 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and very well written Four Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. Thank you for sharing. teri
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This is a very interesting and very well written Four Line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. Thank you for sharing. teri
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
Comment from kiwigirl2821
This is a wonderful four line poem. Its reference to God's mercy or justice is relatable to any religion and you have also created a visually beautiful piece. Well done.
Kiwi
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This is a wonderful four line poem. Its reference to God's mercy or justice is relatable to any religion and you have also created a visually beautiful piece. Well done.
Kiwi
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Alcreator,
An interesting 1/5/5/9 poetic offering.
It's difficult not to relate it to my own religious perspective, but I tried!
Justice in the end for all...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Hello Alcreator,
An interesting 1/5/5/9 poetic offering.
It's difficult not to relate it to my own religious perspective, but I tried!
Justice in the end for all...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
Comment from Ulla
It's always difficult for me to review a poem, which is solely about a deity I don't believe in. I'm glad that you do and that is the most important. I hope you'll receive so many more positive reviews that I was not capable of delivering. Ulla:))
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It's always difficult for me to review a poem, which is solely about a deity I don't believe in. I'm glad that you do and that is the most important. I hope you'll receive so many more positive reviews that I was not capable of delivering. Ulla:))
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
Comment from crzypnter
Short and to the point is your 4 line poem. I and I think many others here will be able to relate to these powerful words. We will all be judged in the end for our life and actions. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
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Short and to the point is your 4 line poem. I and I think many others here will be able to relate to these powerful words. We will all be judged in the end for our life and actions. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is powerful in its message. People may live just as they please, without regard for the fact that the Almighty is a God of justice. ALL will answer to Him.
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Your poem is powerful in its message. People may live just as they please, without regard for the fact that the Almighty is a God of justice. ALL will answer to Him.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
I like the piece. My one suggestion would be to use more specific images. In these spiritual poems I think it's often easy to be general. I'd like to see a longer piece of yours.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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I like the piece. My one suggestion would be to use more specific images. In these spiritual poems I think it's often easy to be general. I'd like to see a longer piece of yours.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you much for the suggestion.
Comment from F. William Lester
Food for thought. I've got a few strident views on organized religion, but in the long run, I agree with your words. In the end, I believe we will be judged on how we treated each other. Nice work. Thanks for sharing it and stay well.
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Food for thought. I've got a few strident views on organized religion, but in the long run, I agree with your words. In the end, I believe we will be judged on how we treated each other. Nice work. Thanks for sharing it and stay well.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
Comment from Ritasher
I like that even though you express your poem as something religious, even someone who's not a believer could borrow a thought from it. For me, the idea seems like that - we, people, can do whatever feels right, because there is nothing that can actually prove what IS wrong or right (only someone / something we may describe as a God / Universe, etc..)
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I like that even though you express your poem as something religious, even someone who's not a believer could borrow a thought from it. For me, the idea seems like that - we, people, can do whatever feels right, because there is nothing that can actually prove what IS wrong or right (only someone / something we may describe as a God / Universe, etc..)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
Comment from nomi338
As I am a baptized and avowed Christian, I believe that all men are stained by Adam's sin and therefore condemned. God in his infinite love allowed his perfect son Jesus the Christ, to be born of a human mother but a Holy and Spiritual father, not descended from sinful Adam. Therefore with the surrendering of his perfect life, he could balance out Adam's sin and redeem man.
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As I am a baptized and avowed Christian, I believe that all men are stained by Adam's sin and therefore condemned. God in his infinite love allowed his perfect son Jesus the Christ, to be born of a human mother but a Holy and Spiritual father, not descended from sinful Adam. Therefore with the surrendering of his perfect life, he could balance out Adam's sin and redeem man.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
