God And Man
A Spiritual Poem; Contest Over; Edited Today119 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Yes, our God is a just God and no sin is hidden from him. You said this well in your 4-line poem, which, to me, expresses we must be thoughtful and careful with how we live our life, living not for the flesh but to glorify our God. Beautiful presentation.
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Yes, our God is a just God and no sin is hidden from him. You said this well in your 4-line poem, which, to me, expresses we must be thoughtful and careful with how we live our life, living not for the flesh but to glorify our God. Beautiful presentation.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
Comment from kahpot
Yes God does see, hear, and act on all that He bestowed, these words say a lot in just so few, very well written and presented, hope you did well in your contest****kahpot
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Yes God does see, hear, and act on all that He bestowed, these words say a lot in just so few, very well written and presented, hope you did well in your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
Comment from Norm Valentine
Like the acknowledgement that God does punish sin. And that it is called justice. I'm not happy that a disclaimer was required. The artwork is nice, though borrowed.
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Like the acknowledgement that God does punish sin. And that it is called justice. I'm not happy that a disclaimer was required. The artwork is nice, though borrowed.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
Comment from RGstar
Fitting for this time of year. Your poem depicts; you reap what you sow, especially when seen by the almighty, for He sees all things, and that is evident throughout.
Have a good Holy week forthcoming.
Best wishes.
RGstar
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Fitting for this time of year. Your poem depicts; you reap what you sow, especially when seen by the almighty, for He sees all things, and that is evident throughout.
Have a good Holy week forthcoming.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Alcreator: our world is full of sin and crushing. Maybe,
you can forgive others and connect with God's love.
We are all brothers and sisters. Anyway, you followed the
poems format. The photo is amazing and joyful.
flylikeaneagle
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Alcreator: our world is full of sin and crushing. Maybe,
you can forgive others and connect with God's love.
We are all brothers and sisters. Anyway, you followed the
poems format. The photo is amazing and joyful.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
Comment from alexa rose
This poem is excellent! The poem portrays a Gods kindness and justice very well. A simple 4 line poem, able to show expression easily, is very impressive.
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This poem is excellent! The poem portrays a Gods kindness and justice very well. A simple 4 line poem, able to show expression easily, is very impressive.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning write in its spiritually rendered verse and presentation - expressive and honest in its understanding and direct witness to His Word...
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In my opinion, a stunning write in its spiritually rendered verse and presentation - expressive and honest in its understanding and direct witness to His Word...
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
Comment from QC Poet
The interesting Photo captured my attention as I read you four line poem, the notes help me understand the intent much better as I still am trying to figure out the Representation of the Deity with Jesus Christ but not to the theme related to belief. Thanks for Sharing your poem. Blessings.
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The interesting Photo captured my attention as I read you four line poem, the notes help me understand the intent much better as I still am trying to figure out the Representation of the Deity with Jesus Christ but not to the theme related to belief. Thanks for Sharing your poem. Blessings.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
God has several names, but He is still the one God. His love for us as a Father comes with everything we expect from our human father. Except, God's love is total, but He will punish those who do not obey His laws and not ask for His forgiveness. You have written your four-lined-poem using the best words possible. Well done and good luck! :))Sandra xx
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God has several names, but He is still the one God. His love for us as a Father comes with everything we expect from our human father. Except, God's love is total, but He will punish those who do not obey His laws and not ask for His forgiveness. You have written your four-lined-poem using the best words possible. Well done and good luck! :))Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
Comment from Possummagic
Good work. This is definitely a contender to watch for the contest.. once again it never ceases to amaze me how such few words can convey such a powerful message. Bless. Marie xx
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Good work. This is definitely a contender to watch for the contest.. once again it never ceases to amaze me how such few words can convey such a powerful message. Bless. Marie xx
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
