God And Man
A Spiritual Poem; Contest Over; Edited Today119 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Some might believe that even though they are sinners, they will be forgiven in the end if they say oops! sorry.....but only God knows a true repentance and only he will decide if forgiveness is merited. Nice poem! Smiles to you!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Some might believe that even though they are sinners, they will be forgiven in the end if they say oops! sorry.....but only God knows a true repentance and only he will decide if forgiveness is merited. Nice poem! Smiles to you!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thanks for this proficient and creditable review.
Wish you every success in your chosen goal.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
28/01/2021
Thursday
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this beautiful review and thanks for good wishes for the contest.
Wish you every success for your chosen goal.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
28/01/2021
Thursday
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You're welcome and thank you!
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You're welcome and thank you!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very nicely written 1-5-5-9 poem. Very Beautiful words. God only knows man's sin. Such a nice photo to go with your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a very nicely written 1-5-5-9 poem. Very Beautiful words. God only knows man's sin. Such a nice photo to go with your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
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Thanks for this beautiful and helpful review and thank you very much for good wishes.
Wish you every success for your chosen goal
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
28/01/2021 Thursday
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, A. L. D. And it's the age old struggle within us; good verses evil; we have the capacity for both within us. I'd like to think good wins out most of the time
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Another fine poem, A. L. D. And it's the age old struggle within us; good verses evil; we have the capacity for both within us. I'd like to think good wins out most of the time
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thanks for this great review and thank you very much for good wishes.
Wish you every success for your chosen goal
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
28/01/2021 Thursday
Comment from Leann DS
This poem meets the syllable count criteria for the contest. The poem's rhythm is comfortable and The lines flow well together. I wish you the very best in the contest. Good luck. Hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This poem meets the syllable count criteria for the contest. The poem's rhythm is comfortable and The lines flow well together. I wish you the very best in the contest. Good luck. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review. Thank you very much for good wishes.
Wish you every success for your chosen goal.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
28/01/2021 Thursday
Comment from Gert sherwood
Alcreator Litt Dear
Your 4 Line Poem with 1, 5, 5, 9 syllable
God and Man
I believe God knows when we sin, and one ask to be forgiven
He will.
I like what you wrote--
Only knows man's sin
Gert
Gert
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Alcreator Litt Dear
Your 4 Line Poem with 1, 5, 5, 9 syllable
God and Man
I believe God knows when we sin, and one ask to be forgiven
He will.
I like what you wrote--
Only knows man's sin
Gert
Gert
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thanks for this review.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
28/01/2021 Thursday
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You are most welcome
Alcreator Litt Dear
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You are most welcome
Alcreator Litt Dear
Comment from Vanna1
That last line keeps tripping me up. The wording is choppy. The whole poem does not flow well. However it is a mystical concept to evoke deep thought, with a good presentation to go with it. Thanks for sharing. I looked at other ratings sorry mine is low, but I am just being honest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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That last line keeps tripping me up. The wording is choppy. The whole poem does not flow well. However it is a mystical concept to evoke deep thought, with a good presentation to go with it. Thanks for sharing. I looked at other ratings sorry mine is low, but I am just being honest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Comment from Victoria...
Interesting concept poem. I like that you say it's not related to any particular religion. I know you have a syllable count for the poem, but in the last line it sounds like you are telling God to confess. Is that what you meant?
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Interesting concept poem. I like that you say it's not related to any particular religion. I know you have a syllable count for the poem, but in the last line it sounds like you are telling God to confess. Is that what you meant?
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this review.
You know, because of syllable challenged poem, I had to use poetic licence.
You know, I cannot tell God to confess, absurdly.
Wish you every success in your chosen goal.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
21/01/2021
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
An interesting poem, particularly in light of the Author's notes. As I interpret it, you are are saying that God -in whatever form or structure is the only one who knows our sins. In the end, God will save or punish as desired.
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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An interesting poem, particularly in light of the Author's notes. As I interpret it, you are are saying that God -in whatever form or structure is the only one who knows our sins. In the end, God will save or punish as desired.
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this commanding review.
I wish to mention that only a sinner can confess to or before God and as per God's Exclusive-Perfect-Wise Justice, HE may award the sinner (or crime committer) a punishment or HE may save him, but man cannot do this, for if a sin(or crime) is recorded or booked under the law of the land, even if there is confession, though it is not allowed, before the Judge or Jury, or the Court of Law, if the sin(or crime) is proved, the committer will be punished as per the law.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
25/01/2021
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes man has the choice of how he lives but if you follow doctrine, all is forgiven if you believe and honestly repent.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Yes man has the choice of how he lives but if you follow doctrine, all is forgiven if you believe and honestly repent.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review.
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
25/01/2021
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No problem, Al.
Joan
