Wisdom
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your post about wisdom concerning parents, Iza. I like the way you wrote about the child coming from God to bring joy and happiness to parents lives. Your ending is a great message to all about parents responsibility to teach their child(ren) well.
Thanks for sharing,
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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You did a great job with your post about wisdom concerning parents, Iza. I like the way you wrote about the child coming from God to bring joy and happiness to parents lives. Your ending is a great message to all about parents responsibility to teach their child(ren) well.
Thanks for sharing,
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, Ms. Jan, I wish you a wonderful day.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
If everybody practiced this piece of wisdom we would have a much better society to live in. I think we should hammer into people. I really do. Thank you.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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If everybody practiced this piece of wisdom we would have a much better society to live in. I think we should hammer into people. I really do. Thank you.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your great review.
Comment from DonandVicki
I enjoyed the flavor of this essay. It gives us elderly people a chance to look back and long for the days when we were raising a family. There are many things that I would do differently but, "all's well that ends well."
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I enjoyed the flavor of this essay. It gives us elderly people a chance to look back and long for the days when we were raising a family. There are many things that I would do differently but, "all's well that ends well."
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
Comment from robyn corum
Iza,
A nice, simple life lesson we should all take great heed to.
We all tend to think Life will present us with the status quo as long as we like - but then, we really all KNOW deep down that's not the case. We just don't want to deal with that reality.
Notes:
1.)We came into our parents(') life with so many expectations
2.) Your book title is obviously misspelled. I have to think it's on purpose but would like to suggest you put something in your notes.
Caleidoscope --> Kaleidoscope
Thanks!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Iza,
A nice, simple life lesson we should all take great heed to.
We all tend to think Life will present us with the status quo as long as we like - but then, we really all KNOW deep down that's not the case. We just don't want to deal with that reality.
Notes:
1.)We came into our parents(') life with so many expectations
2.) Your book title is obviously misspelled. I have to think it's on purpose but would like to suggest you put something in your notes.
Caleidoscope --> Kaleidoscope
Thanks!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much Robin, I realized I added to the wrong book:( should be part of the Book of Wisdom
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You know how to change/correct that. Right?
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Actually I don't know how to move it to a different book, can you help me pretty pls
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Sure. Go to your PORTFOLIO.
Scroll down to the correct book - the one your poem is in currently. Just underneath it, you will see a box on the left with three titles (probably all the same). Beside this, there are three options. One of them is 'remove from book'. In the boxes - scroll down to the correct title and when it appears in the box next to the bottom option of removing - click 'remove from book' - let me know when that's done.
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Hi Robin:) Thank you so much it worked I moved to the right book:)
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Good! Now go back to your portfolio, find the correct post, look toward the bottom at all the options and click on ?add to book?
It will bring you to a new screen where you must scroll to the right book you want. Then click to choose. Let me know if it works for you.
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Yay!
Comment from country ranch writer
Children do not stay little long and they teach us so many things over the year growing up. Our parents were given to us by Gog so is our duty to love them more as they become old and fragile.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Children do not stay little long and they teach us so many things over the year growing up. Our parents were given to us by Gog so is our duty to love them more as they become old and fragile.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you and it's so sad when the leave us and go upstairs:(
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Smiles
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Comment from estory
I think its a wonderful tribute to parents, and families. There was an interesting perspective in the beginning when you seem to tell this story from the child's point of view, trying to make sense of this new world he/she has stepped into. estory
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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I think its a wonderful tribute to parents, and families. There was an interesting perspective in the beginning when you seem to tell this story from the child's point of view, trying to make sense of this new world he/she has stepped into. estory
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much and I really appreciate for catching on the child point of view. When I started to write this story I was thinking about my dad that passed away one year ago and how lost I felt for the entire year.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Poignant--well said, point taken.
How God sent you into your PARENTS' LIVES to bring joy and happiness. Who said that being a child IS an easy task? We came into our PARENTS' LIVES with so MANY expectations and dreams.
We GO through so much starting with day one.
proudly hang them on the walls [OMIT: OF] within their house.
We go to school, they SPEND time
Sometimes we make them sad with our choices, but [omit: then they will] THEY support us no matter what. Then the TIME COMES when they have to return
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Poignant--well said, point taken.
How God sent you into your PARENTS' LIVES to bring joy and happiness. Who said that being a child IS an easy task? We came into our PARENTS' LIVES with so MANY expectations and dreams.
We GO through so much starting with day one.
proudly hang them on the walls [OMIT: OF] within their house.
We go to school, they SPEND time
Sometimes we make them sad with our choices, but [omit: then they will] THEY support us no matter what. Then the TIME COMES when they have to return
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your fast review:)
Comment from glindaboy52
A nice narrative reflection on the cycle if life. I like the way it loops birth to death with the key thread of our parents. It flows very nicely without effort or force.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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A nice narrative reflection on the cycle if life. I like the way it loops birth to death with the key thread of our parents. It flows very nicely without effort or force.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you:)
Comment from Raul1
I am so happy that you wrote this article. You prove a point that there are people who cheer us up during bad times. Great advice. It's great that I have a healthy family. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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I am so happy that you wrote this article. You prove a point that there are people who cheer us up during bad times. Great advice. It's great that I have a healthy family. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful support:)
