Comment from Ann Market

Excellent

What a cute poem! Puppy love; so sweet!

It is so true...little energizer batteries that suddenly plop down next to you and fall asleep. Adorable!

Good luck to you in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Sometimes I doubt whether these two know how to sleep!!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello anonymous

Great entry for the 2-10-2 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines.

I like your puppies topic.

Good luck!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 2-10-2, Puppy Love, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers of those hairy terrors that we love to chase until they win.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. They make sure they win one way or the other.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Beautiful photo! And you have captured the beauty of the puppies in your words - their boundless energy, their love and joy, their comfort. Very well written. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

There is certainly an awful lot of joy packed into those little puppy bundles! This is a good write for the contest and a good picture to accompany the writing.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is a very precious and very well written 2-10-2 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. Your picture is so adorable and goes so well with your very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thank you for the very positive review.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 2-10-2 poem for the contest
which dog lovers on fanstory will relate to.
If only people could have the same energy.
Great picture.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Part of me says God help us if everybody has the same energy as these two.

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

so adorable and nice photo
simply outstanding!
very cleaver words to make this come to life
very believable and thought out
thank you for sharing
I hope for the best in the contest

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Omar sb

Excellent

Love this!
The image of two adorable puppies & a clear poetic passage to describe them;
Good work.
Continue to enjoy your two handful bundles of joy.
Best of Luck in the Contest!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

First I adore the picture of these guys. Very cute.
Your poem is wonderful. In rhyme, you sum up of the fun and love a puppy can bring.
I truly enjoyed this write.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.