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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your topic is unique for your poem, Mystery Author. Your picture is fitting, too. However, your three lines do not rhyme which is required. Perhaps you will have time to revise. I'll check back to see.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Your topic is unique for your poem, Mystery Author. Your picture is fitting, too. However, your three lines do not rhyme which is required. Perhaps you will have time to revise. I'll check back to see.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Yikes! That blows.
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disable it and work some more on it you can do it
Comment from mermaids
You have created a vivid poem with the 1-6-1 form. The picture is perfect to go with your words. a home can still stand even if the heart of it is gone. You have created a true to life poem.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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You have created a vivid poem with the 1-6-1 form. The picture is perfect to go with your words. a home can still stand even if the heart of it is gone. You have created a true to life poem.
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you, m
