A Letter to God
Walter's letter to God.16 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is an honest and sincere prayer from from a man who just wants people to love one another and live in peace. These are lovely thoughts. I pray God's blessings for both you and Walter.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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This is an honest and sincere prayer from from a man who just wants people to love one another and live in peace. These are lovely thoughts. I pray God's blessings for both you and Walter.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from lyenochka
That is a sweet prayer. We all need peace and although the world is in such a mess, God can still give us peace in our hearts and spirits. And when His kingdom comes, we all will have peace.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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That is a sweet prayer. We all need peace and although the world is in such a mess, God can still give us peace in our hearts and spirits. And when His kingdom comes, we all will have peace.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Michelle Gurule
I thought this was lovely, especially of the humanity that despite not being the intentional focus, I would argue, is very dominant. Sometimes that is the best thing that writers can give to their audience!
Michelle
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I thought this was lovely, especially of the humanity that despite not being the intentional focus, I would argue, is very dominant. Sometimes that is the best thing that writers can give to their audience!
Michelle
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from DonandVicki
I liked the part at the beginning of the story when Walter was pondering on how to make the situation in the world better. Walter realized that WE cannot do anything without God.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I liked the part at the beginning of the story when Walter was pondering on how to make the situation in the world better. Walter realized that WE cannot do anything without God.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thanks! I agree.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading and reviewing your interesting letter to God. It makes sense. The image is a good choice. Perhaps you could add a little about Walter in author notes.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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I enjoyed reading and reviewing your interesting letter to God. It makes sense. The image is a good choice. Perhaps you could add a little about Walter in author notes.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from greyson ernst
this is a really really nice poem i have no suggestions for the poem or the picture actually maybe a dove and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
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this is a really really nice poem i have no suggestions for the poem or the picture actually maybe a dove and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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It's not a poem. It's a letter. Thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed it.
