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Comment from RetroStarfish
This poem is clever yet simple. You can't go wrong with cake! I like the cheeky title. Nicely done in only eleven syllables - although I could do without the capital letters (it has always felt like shouting to me, long before we started tapping out communications on phones.)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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This poem is clever yet simple. You can't go wrong with cake! I like the cheeky title. Nicely done in only eleven syllables - although I could do without the capital letters (it has always felt like shouting to me, long before we started tapping out communications on phones.)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three good rhymes and correct syllable.
A topic that many will relate to of the sweet pastries.
Nicely done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three good rhymes and correct syllable.
A topic that many will relate to of the sweet pastries.
Nicely done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thanks Robert
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You deserve to win
just for the image of
those delectable desserts!
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and rhyme.
-They do look delicious,
but I bet they are really sweet, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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-You deserve to win
just for the image of
those delectable desserts!
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic and rhyme.
-They do look delicious,
but I bet they are really sweet, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thanks Pam
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You are welcome.
