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All Have Sinned

A word acrostic

12 total reviews 
Comment from GE Parson
Exceptional
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Hey Pat-
Tremendous Acrostic! You put god's plan of
salvation in it, so anyone reading it has no excuse to miss Heaven after their death.
Your Brother. Jerry

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your review. Bro, Jerry, my book is now in the hands of the publisher and should be available around Easter.
Comment from BrooklynnPreston
Exceptional
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I absolutely love how you wrote these lines starting with the words to 'For all have sinned and come short of the glory of God' so well and beautifully. Very creative idea and as always your work is very professional and nice to read. Good luck with the future. God Bless.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written word acrostic poem about the human race who are sinners and need the mercy and grace of God to be saved and accepted by God when we are reborn.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Teri7
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Patricia, This is a very nice and well written, and true word acrostic word poem you have penned. I have never tried an acrostic like this one. Thank you for sharing this. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Mistydawn
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What a great message with a bible verse that inspired the poem as a bonus. Despite all our shortcomings it's nice to know that we can be forgiven if we just ask.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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I remember learning as a child that the first step to solving a problem is seeing that there IS one. By the same token, one must realize he/she is lost, and has sinned, before salvation can come. Your word acrostic clearly conveys its message.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your review. I appreciate it.
Comment from BethShelby
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I really like this word acrostic. You have laid out what God expects His children to recognize. That is why we need a savior because we are born sinners and only Christ through his perfect live could redeem us.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from jaded831
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Very inspiring, it's nice to know if we are remorseful for our sins, we will be forgiven. Jesus knows our heart and He sees the truth, so our want and need must be real. Great poem.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Very creative Patricia to use the Bible verse and to remind us that we need to acknowledge our sins and trust in Jesus.
Very well said and done.
Regards,
Mary

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your nice review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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None of us are perfect Patricia and we try and live our lives within the parameters of good as opposed to evil and most people are, I believe, good in life, I enjoyed your faithful acrostic poem, have a great day, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thanks for your nice review.