Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

Your faith shines through in this well written short poem. It's something that I envy, such a deep commitment to the Lord, I believe but have questions. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

boogienights, God allows our questions.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine faithful write about the biblical story and your spiritual words are uplifting and your nonet is perfectly formed, I wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thanks, Dolly.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I think you have a winner here, you put the essence of our existence in these lines:"one
droplet
of His blood
is all it took
for a second chance ~
cleansing me of past sins" . Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thank you, Iza.

Comment from Sharon Nolen

Excellent

This was a simple story of salvation. Most of the lines connected well together and flowed well.
The only lines that didn't seem to fit, to my personal understanding, were: "helping me to clear the path for others to pray together".

I guess I didn't know how the one drop of blood contributed to helping you clear the path for others to pray together. But all the rest was really good. I'm sure as the writer, you know exactly what that meant.
Good work. I really enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Sharon, because I was saved, I shared the story of salvation to help others be saved.

reply by Sharon Nolen on 23-Jan-2021

I think you did an excellent job of sharing the story of salvation. I, too, am saved. So I can appreciate your work.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

Indeed, it is intriguing to know what people find heaven to be. I think It is individual and subjective. What is the treasure of god?
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

The treasure of God is life eternal, rjuselius.

Comment from Jenny Kartchner

Excellent

It is amazing and wonderful how a song inspired you to pen this poem. Brief but to the point and well written in form and content. Thank you and God bless you.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thanks, Jenny.

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

This is awesome! I love the shape of it, with the red font, like the drop of blood is becoming an ocean of faith. Or, if it was green, perhaps a christmas tree. :) Really cool. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thanks, Erika.

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

nice job this is really really impressive no job just a thought a picture it would be perfect and as always keep writing and stay safe


sincerely Greyson Ernst

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thanks, Greyson.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A poem that expresses the gift of our Lord so very well. I am amazed when reading the Bible that when some people are healed just by touching his robe. We all need his blood.

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 Comment Written 22-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Amen, Donald.