Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thank you for sharing the joy you felt from that song's great message. You did a great job with your nonet. Some people change words or spacing to make a more perfect triangle but you said what you wanted to in this form. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, lyenochka. Rdfrdmom2

Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel

Excellent

Beautiful poem with an interesting shape! I like the poem as well as the message you are conveying - that we are cleansed by the shedding of Jesus' blood.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, Susan.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written spiritual poem about the blood of Jesus that He Shed for each one of us He offered one drop that is all we need to cleanse us from our sins.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, Sandra.

Comment from Ann Market

Excellent

This is so true... you have written this wonderfully! I think it was creative and unique to not include a picture... it brings the reader's focus back to the meaning and importance of the words. This is lovely; thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, Ann.

Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

One kiss is all we get from the Son of the Father, author. He gave us another chance for eternal life. Many which to walk their own road and it is all right, for God gave us the freedom to choose. this is a good offering for the Spiritual Contest. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thank you so much, poetwatch.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very well written in this format to give the shape you wanted. Your poem is well composed and well thought through, expressing an eternal magnificent truth.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thanks, Wendy.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello anonymous

Excellent entry for the Spiritual writing prompt contest. You fulfilled the rules of writing a poem of spiritual in nature.

I like the poem based on a song.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thanks so much.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This spiritual nonet, A Droplet of Blood, has the proper formatting and helps the reader envision a tiny drop expanding to a cleansing flood.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thanks, Bill.

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Those word might just work in a song. Sometimes I write something and a tune pops in my head and I swear it's a song, but mostly not LOL Keep on writing. Your poem speaks loudly

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thanks, Patty.

reply by Patty Palmer on 23-Jan-2021

You're welcome
Patty

Comment from Susan Larson

Excellent

You piqued my curiosity and I looked up that song. What initially came to mind was Tanya Tucker's Delta Dawn and the promise of a mansion in the sky. I like your song better! Very meaningful poem. I loe it.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, Susan.