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Small facts from the everyday life

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is an interesting example of juxtaposition: "but my wisdom is still young, or as some people are saying, still green!" i asked him thinks those who have young wisdom are new souls. They haven't lived enough other lives to be able to have collected the wisdom that we who have lived many past lives have collected.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2024

Comment from papa55mike
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Well, I love your achievements. I'm 67 and yes, that is a achievement to still be here. So celebrate like that granny in the picture! What a wonderfully written piece. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2024

Comment from BethShelby
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What more could one hope to achieve that to live life to the fullest. It sound like you have done more than most people ane you have acrued some wonderful memories along the way so now put you lack of achievemnts down. I think you have done quite well.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

Comment from Navada
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This life is full of adventure and you are extremely brave to have cast caution to the winds and just go for it! I like your style. I find it difficult to move out of my comfort zone, so I applaud your courage. :)

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much Navada. As a child I was not very brave, but when I went to study in Bulgaria I opened up like a cactus folwer:) better later, than never!
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Comment from patcelaw
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In this world today, we all have to have a little bit of crazy in ourselves in order to survive. I enjoyed your story very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May God bless and keep you safe. Patricia.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much Pat:)
Comment from lyenochka
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I look your "crazy" list and I think you have the best kind of "crazy." You are brave and open to new adventures and you don't stop to second guess and worry about every little thing. Most people who over-analyze won't be able to reach their dreams because they don't have the good kind of crazy. Keep it up! I cheering you on!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much, you've made my day:X:X:
Comment from Julie G1
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So well written, you are but a spring chicken reborn! This tale does present a concise and apt use of imagery which worked well for this reader. The graphic chosen was also a classic. This reader anticipates more such writing.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much Julie for taking a chance on this little piece.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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There is a whole lot to be said about someone who isn't afraid to step out on a ledge and do what most think is crazy. Of course, many of the things most would say aren't good. But scary as it might sound, I think we probably have more in common than I'd be willing to admit to most. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    Thank you again :)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Amen!!!!!! I like your craziness. It sounds good to me, but I probably rate as crazy myself.

Crazy enough to choose to go to an Ukrainian church , instead of a Romanian. (extra space with the comma)

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
    Thank you:)
Comment from sunnilicious
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That was a great personal essay. Let 50 be the new 25, especially with all that dreaming. Tone it down to be more realistic and you'd be somebody else. Don't think about it until it's here. Enjoy!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much