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6/5/3 Senryu
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Sounds like a preteen, they seem to start noticing time to play and hang out with kids their age before the Sunsets. Beautifully expressed in this 4-6-4 Syllable format. Thanks for Sharing this poem offering with us. Blessings
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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