I Have So Much To Do ...
6/5/3 Senryu21 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That's a wonderful thing that our grandchildren can point us to the beauty of nature like the sunset. It's too easy in our busy lives to miss these unless children with their sense of wonder notice and point them out to us.
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That's a wonderful thing that our grandchildren can point us to the beauty of nature like the sunset. It's too easy in our busy lives to miss these unless children with their sense of wonder notice and point them out to us.
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review, Helen. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
This ultra-concise poem thoughtfully implies so much in its contrast of an adult, preoccupied with taking care of the responsibilities of the day, while the child enjoys the beauties of nature.
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This ultra-concise poem thoughtfully implies so much in its contrast of an adult, preoccupied with taking care of the responsibilities of the day, while the child enjoys the beauties of nature.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review, Janice. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
A beautifully written senryu. So much to do my grandson smiles and points to the sunset. Beautiful presentation font colour and background. I love your photo. Very well done.
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A beautifully written senryu. So much to do my grandson smiles and points to the sunset. Beautiful presentation font colour and background. I love your photo. Very well done.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review, Joanne. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from DonandVicki
From a Childs perspective, so much to do usually means tomorrow and tomorrow and... I love watching the sunset with my twelve grandchildren, especially when camping.
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From a Childs perspective, so much to do usually means tomorrow and tomorrow and... I love watching the sunset with my twelve grandchildren, especially when camping.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review, Don and Vicki. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from muffinmama
This poem perfectly illustrates what is most important in life. It's not the millions of chores and tasks we are all burdened with, but our loved ones. Is there anything more precious than experiencing the wonder of a sunset through the eyes of a child?
Wonderful poem. Thanks for the read.
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This poem perfectly illustrates what is most important in life. It's not the millions of chores and tasks we are all burdened with, but our loved ones. Is there anything more precious than experiencing the wonder of a sunset through the eyes of a child?
Wonderful poem. Thanks for the read.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry. I like how you structured your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
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I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry. I like how you structured your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry. I like how you structured your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
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I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry. I like how you structured your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from TayMGMT
What a beautiful reminder to enjoy the precious moments. We get so lost sometimes In our never-ending lists and places to be, sometimes it takes child like innocence to reconnect us. Great job!
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What a beautiful reminder to enjoy the precious moments. We get so lost sometimes In our never-ending lists and places to be, sometimes it takes child like innocence to reconnect us. Great job!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review, tay.
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Comment from Erika Seshadri
Quite nice. A great reminder to pause and enjoy the simple beauty of nature. I love Japanese-form poetry. So subtle and profound at the same time. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Quite nice. A great reminder to pause and enjoy the simple beauty of nature. I love Japanese-form poetry. So subtle and profound at the same time. I look forward to reading more of your work!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Of course he does, that's what is important to him, and he wants to be sure you see it, Gypsy. Your presentation is great--the color scheme works well, the image is beautiful, and your overall message is subtle. We all need to enjoy nature more.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Of course he does, that's what is important to him, and he wants to be sure you see it, Gypsy. Your presentation is great--the color scheme works well, the image is beautiful, and your overall message is subtle. We all need to enjoy nature more.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your kind review, Jan. I appreciate your feedback.
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