I Have So Much To Do ...
6/5/3 Senryu21 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'I Have So Much To Do...', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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'I Have So Much To Do...', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Gypsy,
You're very welcome.
Stay safe! and hugs,
the Duchess
Comment from Mark Schardine
I have so much to do ...
my grandson points out
the sunset
Your grandson understands life's true priorities very well. Capture joy during the brief moment it is offered.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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I have so much to do ...
my grandson points out
the sunset
Your grandson understands life's true priorities very well. Capture joy during the brief moment it is offered.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Mark.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from rspoet
Hello Gypsy,
Now this poem is what a senyru should be and do.
The contrast between the young and old,
between nature and human nature.
The hectic life of adult and the simplicity of the child
who sees the beauty of the sunset.
Perfect presentation.
And, of course, a sunset is followed by six stars.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Hello Gypsy,
Now this poem is what a senyru should be and do.
The contrast between the young and old,
between nature and human nature.
The hectic life of adult and the simplicity of the child
who sees the beauty of the sunset.
Perfect presentation.
And, of course, a sunset is followed by six stars.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Robert, you are very kind. I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars. You got the meaning perfectly.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I know the feeling! There are never enough daylight hours to get everything done and I am often fighting time, your Grandson is very wise! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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I know the feeling! There are never enough daylight hours to get everything done and I am often fighting time, your Grandson is very wise! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words, Dolly. Have a nice day!
Gypsy
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like the thought you have expressed here. No matter how busy we may think we are, we need to take time to enjoy pleasant things like the sunset. Children grow up fast, and too soon they are no longer little.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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I like the thought you have expressed here. No matter how busy we may think we are, we need to take time to enjoy pleasant things like the sunset. Children grow up fast, and too soon they are no longer little.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
Thank you very much for your review and feedback. Have a nice day.
Gypsy
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You are welcome
Comment from royowen
Kids see things so simplistically, they see the wonder of the things around them that we simply can't view in that way, a beautifully written senryu Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Kids see things so simplistically, they see the wonder of the things around them that we simply can't view in that way, a beautifully written senryu Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
Comment from Boogienights
Your grandson has the right idea. There may be a lot to do, but the end of the day is a time of rest. I think this is a lovely poem, formatted beautifully. Thank you for sharing this great poem and your grandson's wisdom. :)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Your grandson has the right idea. There may be a lot to do, but the end of the day is a time of rest. I think this is a lovely poem, formatted beautifully. Thank you for sharing this great poem and your grandson's wisdom. :)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Senryu about small wise guy who knows there are always things that need to be done, but the sun waits for nobody and will set each day when it is his time to set.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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A very well-written Senryu about small wise guy who knows there are always things that need to be done, but the sun waits for nobody and will set each day when it is his time to set.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, the subtle humour here is brilliant. It is just like a child to notice that time is running late when there is so much more still to be done.
Very well written, Gypsy. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Ha, the subtle humour here is brilliant. It is just like a child to notice that time is running late when there is so much more still to be done.
Very well written, Gypsy. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful presentation. I think the lotus flower is a nice addition to this poem. I know you spent a lot of time with your grandson so I'm glad that you write about him.
Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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What a beautiful presentation. I think the lotus flower is a nice addition to this poem. I know you spent a lot of time with your grandson so I'm glad that you write about him.
Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your feedback.
Gypsy hugs
