Comment from royowen

Exceptional

As you promised you surpassed yourself with this episode, I think you've broadened the concept of your breedline stories, and you've added a dimension of immortality to these marvellous stories my friend, that's dear little Amy out ofbthe way, now for Martha dear friend, this is so beautifully written, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : The light surrounding him (sweep) over Amy. Swept?

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thank you, dear friend :)

I appreciate all your encouragement and help. You always lift me higher. I'm happy you enjoyed this one. It brings me joy to create a happy ending to something sad.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 19-Jan-2021

That?s my girl, lovely episode. Bless you

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

I'm so glad Jem was able to save Amy and Nicholas was able to stop the men. Your story is well-written, very interesting. Suspenseful in the beginning and tearful at the end. Yes, you made me cry again, darn you, lol. You did warn me last week. Like always, I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thanks, Mistydawn :)

I'm thrilled you enjoyed the sad, but happy ending to this chapter. I really had no plans to let Martha and Amy's characters go this far. But something, along with your encouragement, told me to keep their story going. I think they might just fit into my little Breedline family. :)

Thanks for all your support! You make a difference :)

Big hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from lancellot

Exceptional

Very good. A well written and exciting chapter. I did think everyone was moving slowly without much speed after Jena's warning, but I don't enough to answer that.


Jena watched from the bedroom doorway as Amy sat {in} the floor packing the

- on the floor sounds better.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thank you, lancellot :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. And thanks for the tip. You are so right about (on the floor, instead of in the floor). A second pair of eyes are so helpful. I appreciate your kind words and great review. Hope to hear from you again.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

You really had my heart pounding as Jena smelled evil approaching, and then, even more, when Amy was shot and fighting for her life. It was indeed an exciting chapter to read. I look forward to finding out what happens next wit Amy and her mother. Well done with both words and pictures. The ending told me what Tinker Belle had to do with it all. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thank you, Faye :)

I was hoping this chapter would bring happiness to a sad and dreadful beginning. I did not intend to keep Martha and Amy's characters going this far in the story. For some strange reason, they feel like family to my Breedline crew. I do love a good ending too!

Glad you mentioned Tinker Bell. I adored her as a child and still do. I thought little Amy's character would bring that to light.

Thanks for all your support! It sure does keep me motivated my friend.

Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 19-Jan-2021

I'm happy, as I am really enjoying this series. I wish you all the best with it.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Chapter of the Novel of the Breedline Series speaks interestingly thru an appropriate taletelling, and plot development and realistic dialogues, with a good beginning and a curious wishful ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

Thank you, Alcreator :)

So thrilled to hear you enjoyed another Breedline adventure. I had fun creating it. I think Martha and little Amy are becoming part of the Breedline crew.

Thanks again my friend!
Shana :)