She
Found a perfect mate.77 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
She has found a perfect mate for he is so caring, responsible, sensual, emotional and lovable; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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She has found a perfect mate for he is so caring, responsible, sensual, emotional and lovable; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Thank you.
Comment from Susan Larson
You did a beautiful job within the restrictions of the words not allowed. I hoe there is a special lady out there who can appreciate your romantic, yet whimsical poem.
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You did a beautiful job within the restrictions of the words not allowed. I hoe there is a special lady out there who can appreciate your romantic, yet whimsical poem.
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Thank you.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
It says that when you are in love, you have butterflies in your stomach. Your last two lines captured exactly this feeling: "will never find another
who makes my senses flutter" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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It says that when you are in love, you have butterflies in your stomach. Your last two lines captured exactly this feeling: "will never find another
who makes my senses flutter" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment from roof35
You did it. You wrote a love poem without using the usual words. This is an excellent entry for the Love Poem Contest. I especially like your closing line. Nicely done.
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You did it. You wrote a love poem without using the usual words. This is an excellent entry for the Love Poem Contest. I especially like your closing line. Nicely done.
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Comment from Boogienights
Well done, no forbidden words and the poem makes sense, while celebrating the feelings of love. Thank you so much for sharing, and good luck in the contest. :)
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Well done, no forbidden words and the poem makes sense, while celebrating the feelings of love. Thank you so much for sharing, and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written love poem about the perfect mate coming into your life at the right time and bring comfort to your soul and you never need to seek another.
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A very well-written love poem about the perfect mate coming into your life at the right time and bring comfort to your soul and you never need to seek another.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
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Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the contest
excluding the words listed and still managed to
get a smooth love poem with very good rhymes.
The perfect mate is hard to find, but when she
appears, there is no doubt.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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You've written an excellent poem for the contest
excluding the words listed and still managed to
get a smooth love poem with very good rhymes.
The perfect mate is hard to find, but when she
appears, there is no doubt.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
