Made it So
a fifteen-syllable poem17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifteen syllable poem. Once we get rid of a bad place, we are not keen to return there but rather stay at the better place we found.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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A very well-written fifteen syllable poem. Once we get rid of a bad place, we are not keen to return there but rather stay at the better place we found.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Sandra, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Boogienights
This is an interesting poem, i think I agree,
I wouldn't want to go back either. I love the way you formatted your poem, it's very eye catching. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.:)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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This is an interesting poem, i think I agree,
I wouldn't want to go back either. I love the way you formatted your poem, it's very eye catching. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.:)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thank you, BN, for giving this a look.
Comment from Mistydawn
This is well-written, relatable on so many levels. I can see where this could ring true for so many things, abusive relationships, depression, injuries, illness. It could even be a specific town, business. Great job, good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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This is well-written, relatable on so many levels. I can see where this could ring true for so many things, abusive relationships, depression, injuries, illness. It could even be a specific town, business. Great job, good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Thanks, MD
Comment from Sally Law
Me, either. I enjoyed this. Short, succinct, and no messin'! I wish you the win for the upcoming contest, dear Bill. It should fare well....
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Me, either. I enjoyed this. Short, succinct, and no messin'! I wish you the win for the upcoming contest, dear Bill. It should fare well....
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Sal
Comment from lyenochka
I like the bright fonts on the black background. Great job with the rhyming, too. And when I read these words, Trump comes to mind but for some reason he was doing everything possible to go back!
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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I like the bright fonts on the black background. Great job with the rhyming, too. And when I read these words, Trump comes to mind but for some reason he was doing everything possible to go back!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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It will be nice not to think of Trump.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, as far as ideas go, I think this is the best poem you have ever written. It is excellent advice in all times and all places. 15 syllables is that all it takes to say, what needs to be said. If only some people would heed these words, The emergency rooms at the hospitals would not be so impacted.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Dear Bill, as far as ideas go, I think this is the best poem you have ever written. It is excellent advice in all times and all places. 15 syllables is that all it takes to say, what needs to be said. If only some people would heed these words, The emergency rooms at the hospitals would not be so impacted.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Suzanna
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your sentiment makes very good sense. The goal in life is to learn through experience. When there is a bad one, we make an effort and do everything to avoid that same experience.
Ralf
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Your sentiment makes very good sense. The goal in life is to learn through experience. When there is a bad one, we make an effort and do everything to avoid that same experience.
Ralf
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Ralf
Comment from nomi338
Wait. Are you saying that you made a place so bad that you do not want to ever revisit it? I certainly do not blame you. I can well believe that if you made it bad, it is then in a very bad way. LOL.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Wait. Are you saying that you made a place so bad that you do not want to ever revisit it? I certainly do not blame you. I can well believe that if you made it bad, it is then in a very bad way. LOL.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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I wouldn?t want to live in a town that would have me as a citizen.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This well worded poem reminds me of those I know recovering from illness or in recovery. It can speak to so many.
Good work.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Mary
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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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This well worded poem reminds me of those I know recovering from illness or in recovery. It can speak to so many.
Good work.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Mary
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Mary
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very interesting and colorful 15 syllable poem you have penned for the contest. I am with you in that I do not want to go back to a bad place again. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Bill, This is a very interesting and colorful 15 syllable poem you have penned for the contest. I am with you in that I do not want to go back to a bad place again. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 18-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Teri
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you are so welcome! I hope you and your family are safe and well these days my friend!
