Comment from Melodie Michelle

Good

Your poem is nice but I'm wondering what does it have to do with the meaning of life? You never clarified that and by not clarifying it left me kinda hanging in the wind! The meaning of life is different for everyone but shouldn't you point out what your definition of the meaning of life actually is, in your opinion?

Also consider changing the background color because white is so cold and unwelcoming. This screams for warmer colors and it screams for imagery as well;-) I would add a nice photo that ties whatever you were trying to say, all together.

Good luck in the contest!

I appreciate you sharing this work and may God bless you;-)

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021

thanks for the comments

reply by Melodie Michelle on 25-Jan-2021

;-)

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao jake cosmos aller!

I gave you your first vote!

.. you write often about your wife and how you dreamt about her for eight years before fate brought you together.

You say in your notes that you don't know what the meaning of life is?

Many say LOVE ..

those that believe in God say : man's creation was an act of love .. God sent his son to save us .. that was an act of love too..

You found your dream woman and married her ...

You love her, you adore her that 's crystal clear.

she is your muse, your joy, your delight ...

waking up in the morning finding her by your makes you happy ..

Your love for you wife gives meaning to your life .. and vice versa ..

Can you imagine your life without her??

I don't think so from how you speak so intensely about her.

I hope you don't mind me voicing my thoughts.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

thanks for the comments and feedback. appreciated it

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

And so the meaning of life, judged by this poem is...? I suppose it has to be 'love'. Without it there would be no meaning. At least that is what I believe this poem is trying to say.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

thanks for the comments and feedback. appreciated it

Comment from Alli Johnston

Excellent

Your authors note I think puts meaning to your poem when you say you don't know the meaning of life but you immediately thought of your romance and wrote about that. In a sense, it seems as if your idea of the meaning of life revolves around being content and loved

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021

thanks for the comments and feedback. appreciated it