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Food 2

A poem about food

2 total reviews 
Comment from Jenny Kartchner
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Food can get us into trouble sometimes, right? I feel you have demonstrated this in your poem while tempting us at the same time. I had a bit of a hard time with the cocoa-ooo. But after reading it again it read smoother.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thanks. Glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from greyson ernst
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this is really really good nice job and that picture is funny nice job this is a good old poem and as always keep writing and stay safe


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2021

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
    Thank you. I am glad that you enjoyed it.