Zoo Murder:
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Zoo Murder: Who Can Say?"Bull Schlitz has a case of murder at the zoo.
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Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, sometimes I think I will die of old age before you finish this novel. Each chapter adds only a little bit more dried Parmesan cheese to this plate of spaghetti, with all the loops and tangles, and tomato sauce on top to obscure even the tiny meat balls of truth hidden in the script. Was Bull just throwing a red herring onto the plate when he said the victim was already dead before being covered with pig or cow blood and put into the tigers cage?
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Dear Bill, sometimes I think I will die of old age before you finish this novel. Each chapter adds only a little bit more dried Parmesan cheese to this plate of spaghetti, with all the loops and tangles, and tomato sauce on top to obscure even the tiny meat balls of truth hidden in the script. Was Bull just throwing a red herring onto the plate when he said the victim was already dead before being covered with pig or cow blood and put into the tigers cage?
Comment Written 16-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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I?ll cut to to the chase.
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Bill - And the beat goes on ... Do you currently have an estimated year of completion for this book? LOL! Hope that stay safe and stay well - best regards, Jerry
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Bill - And the beat goes on ... Do you currently have an estimated year of completion for this book? LOL! Hope that stay safe and stay well - best regards, Jerry
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Jerry. I will try to put more in the chapters.
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Thanks
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
These are the first two that are being questioned, so there is so much room for doubt. The alien blood tells us that this is a setup that didn't work. Obviously, they were implicating the tiger as the attacker. How idiotic would you have to be to think you could get away with killing someone and trying to make it look like the tiger did it.
Note:
Draw returns you () the chair>> 'to' the chair.
Ralf
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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These are the first two that are being questioned, so there is so much room for doubt. The alien blood tells us that this is a setup that didn't work. Obviously, they were implicating the tiger as the attacker. How idiotic would you have to be to think you could get away with killing someone and trying to make it look like the tiger did it.
Note:
Draw returns you () the chair>> 'to' the chair.
Ralf
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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No geniuses here.
Comment from Mistydawn
Shifting the blame is she, hmm. Calling her a tramp him a sleazeball, tells me there's animosity between them. Is she setting them up? It'll be interesting to see what they have to say.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Shifting the blame is she, hmm. Calling her a tramp him a sleazeball, tells me there's animosity between them. Is she setting them up? It'll be interesting to see what they have to say.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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You know they all have dirt on them somehow.
Comment from robyn corum
Bull,
Good choice. He may not be able to talk, but he can reason things out pretty stinking well. haha
This was a good chapter with a lot of action and DRAMA. I am interested in seeing who did this! Hurry up!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Bull,
Good choice. He may not be able to talk, but he can reason things out pretty stinking well. haha
This was a good chapter with a lot of action and DRAMA. I am interested in seeing who did this! Hurry up!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Thanks, Robyn. I?ll probably need to trot out a few more suspects first.
Comment from nomi338
Funny how even big guys do not relish getting shot, especially up close. Nat Taurus is obviously no fool. Mellow Bailey has introduced two additional suspects for the detectives to look at and question. Things just might heat up from here.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Funny how even big guys do not relish getting shot, especially up close. Nat Taurus is obviously no fool. Mellow Bailey has introduced two additional suspects for the detectives to look at and question. Things just might heat up from here.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Thanks, nomi, for giving this a look.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I'm interested in this book. It's getting more complicated now. The guy was supposed to be dead before he was mauled by the tiger. Mellow had some ideas who did it but she was not sure. Nat can understand words.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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I'm interested in this book. It's getting more complicated now. The guy was supposed to be dead before he was mauled by the tiger. Mellow had some ideas who did it but she was not sure. Nat can understand words.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Lisa. It will get more complicated before it clears up.
Comment from lancellot
A well written chapter. Very interesting.
Notes:
now assuming a posture of righteous indignation.
- what does that look like?
Loyne was dead before (his was )ripped up."
- he, or his what
(Then,solemnly), with his eyes
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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A well written chapter. Very interesting.
Notes:
now assuming a posture of righteous indignation.
- what does that look like?
Loyne was dead before (his was )ripped up."
- he, or his what
(Then,solemnly), with his eyes
- space between
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Thanks for the help. I?ll give some physical descriptions for Mellow indignation.
Comment from Jay Squires
the traveling sleazeball Jerry Mathers are quilty of everything up to that [You made guilty into a quilty. And Mellow Bailey looks better draped in guilt!]
Ah-ha! So the big galoot can understand after all. Never trust a man who claims imbecility.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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the traveling sleazeball Jerry Mathers are quilty of everything up to that [You made guilty into a quilty. And Mellow Bailey looks better draped in guilt!]
Ah-ha! So the big galoot can understand after all. Never trust a man who claims imbecility.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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I guess they like quilting.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I'm glad they got Taurus to sit down. He could be quite dangerous. I liked your use of the good ol' name of "Quick Draw" - next thing, I know you'll bring El Kabong on the scene. So far, neither seems to be guilty.
Mathers are quilty of everything up to (guilty?)
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Well, I'm glad they got Taurus to sit down. He could be quite dangerous. I liked your use of the good ol' name of "Quick Draw" - next thing, I know you'll bring El Kabong on the scene. So far, neither seems to be guilty.
Mathers are quilty of everything up to (guilty?)
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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They like quilting.
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Oh okay. 😊
