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Night Life

Poem 2/5/2

2 total reviews 
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great presentation, Mystery Author. I love the image and your well-chosen words. Great job with the syllable count. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
    Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Jenny Kartchner
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I admire that much was said in a few words and also that it brings images and imagination to life. I wonder if it could be made into even fewer words with keeping the syllables the same?

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2021
    Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya