Envy
5-7-5 Poetry37 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Good one Sal. My daughter raising them. They can be noisy at times but always beautiful when they desire to be. Also temperamental and selfish.
Madonna acting at times. LOL.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Good one Sal. My daughter raising them. They can be noisy at times but always beautiful when they desire to be. Also temperamental and selfish.
Madonna acting at times. LOL.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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They are usually mating when they act like that. The males are the beautiful ones. Thank you for the wonderful review and comments. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Ulla
Hehehe, Sally they do have some of the most beautiful plumes, don't they?I loved you humorous 5-7-5 entry for the contest. It's great and I believe it will do very well. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Hehehe, Sally they do have some of the most beautiful plumes, don't they?I loved you humorous 5-7-5 entry for the contest. It's great and I believe it will do very well. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thank, Ulla dear. They roam wild near my home. They are quite the sight. The males are the beautiful ones. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this. Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from royowen
Hah hah, this reminds me of some people I know, I think we humans can have a propensity to be a little on the peacockishness on our day, falsely born of pride, well done, Sally, good luck, Blessings,
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Hah hah, this reminds me of some people I know, I think we humans can have a propensity to be a little on the peacockishness on our day, falsely born of pride, well done, Sally, good luck, Blessings,
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my peacock poem, dear Roy.
Sal XOs...
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Well done Sally
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You are right, Sally. We should appreciate the beauty, but be proud of our own beauty. Good job with your contest entry. Your words create good imagery with a great message. Your syllable count is correct per line. The video was super.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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You are right, Sally. We should appreciate the beauty, but be proud of our own beauty. Good job with your contest entry. Your words create good imagery with a great message. Your syllable count is correct per line. The video was super.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the beautiful review of my beautiful bird! Sending you my best today as always, dear Jan.
Sal XOs....
Comment from Anne Johnston
Peacocks are such beautiful birds. Your word paint a picture of their proud walk, displaying their plumage. Good choice of picture. I like your last line very much.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Peacocks are such beautiful birds. Your word paint a picture of their proud walk, displaying their plumage. Good choice of picture. I like your last line very much.
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my poem. It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
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You are welcome, Sally
Comment from Leann DS
Ha! I knew you were talking about peacocks before I even got down to the video. Well done, friend. I bet that is exactly what peacocks are thinking as they strut their stuff. :-) Hugs and blessings to you.
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Ha! I knew you were talking about peacocks before I even got down to the video. Well done, friend. I bet that is exactly what peacocks are thinking as they strut their stuff. :-) Hugs and blessings to you.
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and comments. Sal XOs...
Comment from fm wright
They do seem to have that attitude, don't they? I find this a wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Beautifully chosen artwork, video and of course, words. May you do well with it in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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They do seem to have that attitude, don't they? I find this a wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Beautifully chosen artwork, video and of course, words. May you do well with it in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and star shower, dear Faye. I'm so honored! I'm glad you enjoyed my entry. I appreciate your kind, generous spirit. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for your week,
Sal XOs....xo....
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You are always welcome. Blesssings to you, sweet Sally.
Faye
