Envy
5-7-5 Poetry37 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Sally, a very good 5/7/5 about the peacock, but these words could apply to a great many people whose middle name is Vanity - perhaps without the plumes though LOL! Lovely picture - they are beautiful when they open their fan feathers, but they are noisy and quite snappy beggars. We had one some years ago. Another good piece of work from you. Love and good luck - Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hello Sally, a very good 5/7/5 about the peacock, but these words could apply to a great many people whose middle name is Vanity - perhaps without the plumes though LOL! Lovely picture - they are beautiful when they open their fan feathers, but they are noisy and quite snappy beggars. We had one some years ago. Another good piece of work from you. Love and good luck - Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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You are a dear! Thanks for the lovely review and appreciated of the peacocks. I have grown up near a farm of them. More peacock poems coming....
Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs...xo....
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Envy, has the proper formatting and suggests an even deeper concern than envy, being the ego of one who has accepted his superiority.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This 5-7-5, Envy, has the proper formatting and suggests an even deeper concern than envy, being the ego of one who has accepted his superiority.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Dear Bill, thanks so much for the lovely review of my peacock poem. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Ronni
Hi dear Sa;;y,
Smiled and giggled all through this one! How clever and creative it
is to impact both nature and character of this eccentric and proud
Peacock, and her full plumaged punch line fanned right in our faces..
LOL...all in this 5-7-5 poem! Funny thought occurred too, that
sometimes there are 'people' among us who are curiously as
conceited and 'full plumaged' and either too casually or knowingly
fan it in our faces or around us....LOL....
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in contest!!!
(Slowly trying to catch up dear, wow you are such a prolific and
prodctive poet! Bless you for it too!
Love, blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Hi dear Sa;;y,
Smiled and giggled all through this one! How clever and creative it
is to impact both nature and character of this eccentric and proud
Peacock, and her full plumaged punch line fanned right in our faces..
LOL...all in this 5-7-5 poem! Funny thought occurred too, that
sometimes there are 'people' among us who are curiously as
conceited and 'full plumaged' and either too casually or knowingly
fan it in our faces or around us....LOL....
Thanks for sharing and best of luck in contest!!!
(Slowly trying to catch up dear, wow you are such a prolific and
prodctive poet! Bless you for it too!
Love, blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2021
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Thank you, sweetest Ronni. You kind review and thoughtful comments make me feel like a queen. Sending you my best today and blessings always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Debra White
Hello Sal,
I really enjoyed this :) It made me laugh and you perfectly summed up the peacock's personality/nature in your 5-7-5.
Gorgeously presented and well written.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Hello Sal,
I really enjoyed this :) It made me laugh and you perfectly summed up the peacock's personality/nature in your 5-7-5.
Gorgeously presented and well written.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, dear Debra. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
How many of us have been envious of somebody or something else? I know I have. It's wrong but we're human and it happens. I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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How many of us have been envious of somebody or something else? I know I have. It's wrong but we're human and it happens. I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your review. I lived most of my life near a peacock farm in Winter Park, Florida. I loved to go and look at them regularly. I have one more peacock poem coming soon. I really think they are beautiful and special. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Gert sherwood
Sally you 5-7-5 poem about being Envy of the peacock showing its beautiful plume, I wish I had the self confidence that the peacock is proud to show.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Sally you 5-7-5 poem about being Envy of the peacock showing its beautiful plume, I wish I had the self confidence that the peacock is proud to show.
Gert
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the beautiful review and kind comments, dear Gert. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
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Sally you are most welxome.
Gert
Comment from Julie Sandy
Very clever entry for the 5-7-5 competition, in three lines you have definitely captured the confidence of the peacock.
Great use of words
Thanks for sharing
Good luck
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Very clever entry for the 5-7-5 competition, in three lines you have definitely captured the confidence of the peacock.
Great use of words
Thanks for sharing
Good luck
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, dear Julie! Sal XOs....
Comment from patcelaw
The peacock when it is in full plume, it is a sight to behold. We had a farm not far from us when I lived in New Mexico and it had a couple of peacocks on the farm. I got to see them several times as they were in full plume.
Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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The peacock when it is in full plume, it is a sight to behold. We had a farm not far from us when I lived in New Mexico and it had a couple of peacocks on the farm. I got to see them several times as they were in full plume.
Patricia
Comment Written 23-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you, dear Pat! Sal XOs....
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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Sally,
What a wonderful poem. You exude self-confidence in this poem. I love your impressionistic photo of the peacock. I think they're the most beautiful bird on earth. Your poem is sweet and it put a smile on my face.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Cindy.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Sally,
What a wonderful poem. You exude self-confidence in this poem. I love your impressionistic photo of the peacock. I think they're the most beautiful bird on earth. Your poem is sweet and it put a smile on my face.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Cindy.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Cindy dear. Sal XOs....
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Sally,
You?re welcome. It was worth six, but l ran out of stars. I?m sorry I didn?t wait til Sunday. Have a nice weekend.
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Thank you, dear. No worries. I appreciate you so much!! XOs....
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Thank you, Sally 😊☀️
Comment from poetwatch
Beauty is and always will be that why us males are on deplay, Sally. If you don't believe me as Jackson. Isn't he the Peacock of your life? :) This is a fantastic offering for the 5-7-5 Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Beauty is and always will be that why us males are on deplay, Sally. If you don't believe me as Jackson. Isn't he the Peacock of your life? :) This is a fantastic offering for the 5-7-5 Poem Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2021
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Thank you, dear poet! Sal xos
