When There Is Freezing Rain
A Quatern31 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A well written and sentimental write as we worry about someone not able to get home because of bad weather, a cleverly rhymed poem and a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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A well written and sentimental write as we worry about someone not able to get home because of bad weather, a cleverly rhymed poem and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Hi, Dolly. I truly appreciate your sharing my Quatern. Many thanks for your very kind praise. Rod
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Well written and so easy to relate to, this poem speaks to the terror we suffer as we worry for those we love, who may be in danger. I have felt the feeling many times, and I found your words perfectly capture what it means to go through this type of worrying.
The picture is an amazing accompaniment to the poem. You did an excellent job.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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Well written and so easy to relate to, this poem speaks to the terror we suffer as we worry for those we love, who may be in danger. I have felt the feeling many times, and I found your words perfectly capture what it means to go through this type of worrying.
The picture is an amazing accompaniment to the poem. You did an excellent job.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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I am so pleased you found my poem easy to relate to. Indeed, we fear for the well-being of our loved ones when they are driving or walking in foul weather. I truly appreciate your kind praise. Rod
Comment from DonandVicki
You perfectly repeated this line "On nights like this..." to where it made the situation seem more and more urgent with each stanza. I can see the fret in the woman's face building.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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You perfectly repeated this line "On nights like this..." to where it made the situation seem more and more urgent with each stanza. I can see the fret in the woman's face building.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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I am so pleased you found the refrain of my poem "perfect." Many thanks for sharing my Quatern. Rod
Comment from flylikeaneagle
PenPal: I can picture how scared the lady is for Claus in this weather. I've been in freezing rain and it's difficult to walk even for my four legged dogs. You have a great flow of words and rhymes. Wonderful!
flylikeaneagle more stars *******************
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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PenPal: I can picture how scared the lady is for Claus in this weather. I've been in freezing rain and it's difficult to walk even for my four legged dogs. You have a great flow of words and rhymes. Wonderful!
flylikeaneagle more stars *******************
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2021
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There is nothing worse than being caught outside when it's sleeting and there's black ice on the highway. I am so pleased you could picture the scene I described. Many thanks for the marvelous rating and kind praise. Rod
Comment from nancyjam
A well crafted entry for this repeating line poem contest. You have blended the repeat line well so the poem flows smoothly.
We all worry when our loved ones are late returning, even Mrs Claus.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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A well crafted entry for this repeating line poem contest. You have blended the repeat line well so the poem flows smoothly.
We all worry when our loved ones are late returning, even Mrs Claus.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Worrying is almost second nature to a mother and a wife during inclement conditions. I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem and appreciate the kind praise.
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully done quatern! And you used that repeated line effectively because worries do repeat themselves in our minds. We definitely worry when loved ones are traveling in dangerous conditions. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Beautifully done quatern! And you used that repeated line effectively because worries do repeat themselves in our minds. We definitely worry when loved ones are traveling in dangerous conditions. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for the high praise of my Quatern, lyenochka. Indeed we worry about loved ones during scary conditions like freezing rain.
Comment from estory
I think you did a great job of capturing this feeling of worrying about someone you care about. You brought in all these specific things like slipping on the ice, losing control of the car, and that made it so much more tangible. estory
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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I think you did a great job of capturing this feeling of worrying about someone you care about. You brought in all these specific things like slipping on the ice, losing control of the car, and that made it so much more tangible. estory
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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I am so pleased you think I captured the anxiety a wife feels when her husband is late coming home during bad weather. Thank you very much for your kind praise.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, meaningful, clear and creative. I pondered on the times the weather was bad and I waited for my sons.
The repeating of the lines made this poem more intense. The poem
flows and connects well. Hope you had a great day!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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The author's words are engaging, meaningful, clear and creative. I pondered on the times the weather was bad and I waited for my sons.
The repeating of the lines made this poem more intense. The poem
flows and connects well. Hope you had a great day!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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I am pleased you could relate so easily to my poem. Many thanks for sharing and your kind praise.
Comment from equestrik
This is a really well composed presentation for the repeating line poetry contest. The picture is poignant and your have created a very lovely entry. Best to you.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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This is a really well composed presentation for the repeating line poetry contest. The picture is poignant and your have created a very lovely entry. Best to you.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for your exceptional rating of my Quatern. I truly appreciate your kind praise and those six bright stars.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
A very well done Quatern. I like the form when it involves a repeating line. It seems to emphasize the message. I love the picture you have connected to this piece it is so apt, as are your well chosen words.
Ralf
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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A very well done Quatern. I like the form when it involves a repeating line. It seems to emphasize the message. I love the picture you have connected to this piece it is so apt, as are your well chosen words.
Ralf
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Raffaelina, for sharing my poem and your encouraging review.
