Re-emergence
Spenserian Sonnet ~ FS Sonnet Class29 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is exquisite, Melissa, and I can identify with it. The word choices and flow of your poem work well together for a delightful and heartfelt post. Good work. Marilyn
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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This is exquisite, Melissa, and I can identify with it. The word choices and flow of your poem work well together for a delightful and heartfelt post. Good work. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2021
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Hello there, Marilyn. I really appreciate this review and your wonderful comments. :)
Melissa
Comment from Anne Johnston
I really like your poem. It is romantic, has good rhyming, and flows very smoothly. I like the closing lines: "From tender, quiet depths reclaimed by me, I offer you a love unbound and free. A very effective ending.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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I really like your poem. It is romantic, has good rhyming, and flows very smoothly. I like the closing lines: "From tender, quiet depths reclaimed by me, I offer you a love unbound and free. A very effective ending.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much Anne!!
Melissa
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You are welcome, Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
This is a Shakespearian sonnet without the breaks in stanzas, Melissa? It is written very well. It must be cold and snowing where you are at. :) Nothing to do, but... cuddle up to a warm fire and drink some tea. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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This is a Shakespearian sonnet without the breaks in stanzas, Melissa? It is written very well. It must be cold and snowing where you are at. :) Nothing to do, but... cuddle up to a warm fire and drink some tea. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you Jose... yes, the Spenserian sonnet has no breaks. :)
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your sonnet is excellent in every respect--creative, skillfully written,
and very descriptive of one's revisiting the past, and deciding to break free from it--welcoming love again.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Your sonnet is excellent in every respect--creative, skillfully written,
and very descriptive of one's revisiting the past, and deciding to break free from it--welcoming love again.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Janice.
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
After reading this poem a few time, which I didn't mind, I could see the shadow in the past that was described with the grey mist. So now you try to get back with him and you succeeded, which was described by the following two lines:
pure emotion reappears...
quiet depths reclaimed by me,
Very nicely done. I like the subtlety.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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After reading this poem a few time, which I didn't mind, I could see the shadow in the past that was described with the grey mist. So now you try to get back with him and you succeeded, which was described by the following two lines:
pure emotion reappears...
quiet depths reclaimed by me,
Very nicely done. I like the subtlety.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks Lisa!!!
Melissa
Comment from nancyjam
Enjoyed this beautiful Sonnet. Very nicely rhymed with strong meter.
It is good to let the past go and start anew. Beautifully expressed.
I love the wonderful imagery of "collecting love's bent fragments as I go."
Thank you for sharing.
Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Enjoyed this beautiful Sonnet. Very nicely rhymed with strong meter.
It is good to let the past go and start anew. Beautifully expressed.
I love the wonderful imagery of "collecting love's bent fragments as I go."
Thank you for sharing.
Nancy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Hi Nancy. Thank you very much for your review.
Melissa
Comment from royowen
One off the things I've decided in my life, is to like myself, in the past I've been down on myself for my myriad of faults, but look at my self through God's eyes, do I need to change? Absolutely, but peace lies in being at peace, that's not quite what you're saying, but it means I don't have be justified, I'm already justified, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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One off the things I've decided in my life, is to like myself, in the past I've been down on myself for my myriad of faults, but look at my self through God's eyes, do I need to change? Absolutely, but peace lies in being at peace, that's not quite what you're saying, but it means I don't have be justified, I'm already justified, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thanks so much Roy.
Melissa
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Welcome Melissa,
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Spenserian Sonnet ~ FS Sonnet Class
Re-emergence
by Sugarray77
Hello, Sugar Ray,
Beautiful Spenserian Sonnet. You are doing very well in your class judging by this sonnet. I agree that music influences how we feel. Sometimes it makes me cry. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Spenserian Sonnet ~ FS Sonnet Class
Re-emergence
by Sugarray77
Hello, Sugar Ray,
Beautiful Spenserian Sonnet. You are doing very well in your class judging by this sonnet. I agree that music influences how we feel. Sometimes it makes me cry. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much, Gypsy!!
Melissa
Comment from Susan Larson
This is beautiful. While I am not well versed enough in the proper form of the Spencerian sonnet, I can say this sonnet touched me deeply. Lovely illustration.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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This is beautiful. While I am not well versed enough in the proper form of the Spencerian sonnet, I can say this sonnet touched me deeply. Lovely illustration.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Susan. I am very happy that it meant something to you... it meant something to me too :)... I so appreciate your thoughts and take on it.
Melissa
Comment from damommy
Very well written sonnet. The rhyme is my favorite. This is beautifully worded, and makes this reader conjure up memories in her own mind. I like how you made the turn in this sonnet, and the last couplet is lovely.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Very well written sonnet. The rhyme is my favorite. This is beautifully worded, and makes this reader conjure up memories in her own mind. I like how you made the turn in this sonnet, and the last couplet is lovely.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Yvonne. I am very happy that it meant something to you... it meant something to me too :)... I so appreciate your thoughts and take on it.
Melissa
