Fat Shadow
7/6/7 Haikuish Tercet11 total reviews
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Oh my. Fat Shadow. That could be a precursor for a new years resolution for many people to start jogging a lot more. LOL A great photo. I like the simplicity of the poem yet the meaning that resonates. No edits or adjustments to suggest.
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Oh my. Fat Shadow. That could be a precursor for a new years resolution for many people to start jogging a lot more. LOL A great photo. I like the simplicity of the poem yet the meaning that resonates. No edits or adjustments to suggest.
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Gypy
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words
Gypy
