Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What an intense chapter. You had me glued to the page from beginning to end. Your description was perfect I could easily picture the transformation in my mind. The cops reply you know what I'm trying to say made me laugh. I'm so glad it turned out the way it did that they were able to stop the beast, the experiments. Your story is well-written, interesting start to finish. Your characters, their thoughts and dialogue seem realistic. Like always, I look forward to reading more. I wish I had a six to give, it's very deserving, but I'm afraid I'm out.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you, Mistydawn :)

I am so happy to hear you enjoyed the scenes. I was worried my character's transformations wouldn't read the way I envisioned them to. It's difficult sometimes describing something you have no idea how it would feel shifting into another creature. My imagination has to take me there.
And don't worry about the stars. I am so grateful for your support and awesome reviews. You definitely keep me motivated.
Stay tuned... next week, more on little Amy and her mama.

Big hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Underground experiments that goes astray, not the image that the ol' doc would like to have attached to his name. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thank you, Iza :)

Yes indeed. The doctor has some explaining to do when my two detectives stops by to take him in.

Thanks for taking the time to read my chapter and give me feedback. This is what I look forward to.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Another fabulous post dear Shana, you keep churning them out, do you know where to fit them In? Another set of mad scientists to join the others thst you've wonderfully created. The creative images that you display so well are all working extremely well dear friend, beautifully written and brilliantly created. Well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Before the (Calvary) arrives. Cavalry.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, Roy :)

This chapter took me a bit to write. All the shifting and transforming was hard to imagine. Glad you liked it! It seems that my Breedline crew keep finding mad scientists in their mix of villains. Seems like Roman saved the day. :)

Thanks again for your support and helpful advice. You always help me out. You are the best!

Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 13-Jan-2021

You are lovely dear girl.

reply by royowen on 13-Jan-2021

You are a talent

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

A truly action packed chapter from begining to end. The way you let it leads me to believe that there's much more. The pictures again, well fit the contents. I am definitely enjoying the ride with this book.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2021

Thanks so much, Faye :)

So thrilled you liked the photos. It took me awhile to find something suitable for this chapter.
And yes, there will be more to this story. Dr. Leonard Manos is Joseph Parker's old therapist. Things will get heated.

Stay tuned... next week, more on little Amy and her mama. I'm hoping you will like how their stories will end up.

Thanks again!
Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 13-Jan-2021

I am definitely looking forward to your next posting.
Wishing you well,
Faye