Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Football Chapter 9 part 2"A mother faces life's struggles.
26 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I'm playing catch up but I like your story. Your family's characters sound like they are involved with sports. It is so awesome to think that you move this family in a new town and there are people who are so concerned about them.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I'm playing catch up but I like your story. Your family's characters sound like they are involved with sports. It is so awesome to think that you move this family in a new town and there are people who are so concerned about them.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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I enjoy the encouragement.
Comment from eliz100
This was a great addition to your story. Small town USA, neighbor helping neighbor. I continue to ejoy your font choice and use of space. I look forward to the next installment
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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This was a great addition to your story. Small town USA, neighbor helping neighbor. I continue to ejoy your font choice and use of space. I look forward to the next installment
Comment Written 14-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear barbara, Do you intend this novel to actually be a romance? If it's not about football, and not about school, the only other thing Left for it to be, would be something about change and character building for All your major protagonists. But I don't think they have a category by that name at Barnes and Noble, or even on Amazon books!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Dear barbara, Do you intend this novel to actually be a romance? If it's not about football, and not about school, the only other thing Left for it to be, would be something about change and character building for All your major protagonists. But I don't think they have a category by that name at Barnes and Noble, or even on Amazon books!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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LOL Thank you for the input.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Those men are so kind, it's lovely to have such a friendly community to live and work in. But, we still have that niggle of worry about her being watched. Does it have anything to do with Frost? Time will tell, in the meantime, although Katherine would deny it, something is beginning to sparkle between her and Gabriel. Superb, Barbara! :)) Sandra xxx
OMG! I clicked on save just as I noticed the six I gave you had changed to a four, and I can only update it to a five now! I'm so sorry, Barb. I owe you!!:(
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Those men are so kind, it's lovely to have such a friendly community to live and work in. But, we still have that niggle of worry about her being watched. Does it have anything to do with Frost? Time will tell, in the meantime, although Katherine would deny it, something is beginning to sparkle between her and Gabriel. Superb, Barbara! :)) Sandra xxx
OMG! I clicked on save just as I noticed the six I gave you had changed to a four, and I can only update it to a five now! I'm so sorry, Barb. I owe you!!:(
Comment Written 12-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Not a problem. It has happened to me before. I completely understand. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robyn corum
Barb,
Nice chapter where we show the old ways of doing things - friends and neighbors jumping in and helping without being asked. Oh, yeah. I remember those days...
Good job!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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Barb,
Nice chapter where we show the old ways of doing things - friends and neighbors jumping in and helping without being asked. Oh, yeah. I remember those days...
Good job!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2021
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I remember those days too and miss them. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Although I love football, nothing beats a good ol' down-to-earth love story that we all can relate to or remember a few bits and pieces of way back when. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Although I love football, nothing beats a good ol' down-to-earth love story that we all can relate to or remember a few bits and pieces of way back when. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Just so you know, we do have a little, very, little highlights of a football game coming up. LOL Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I heard about the snow in Texas.
How much did you get?
-The pizza looks good!
-A good story to go with it
as Katherine gets her house
in some kind of working order.
-The story flows well, and you
must have had some experience
with coaches and young men
helping with packing and unpacking!
-It is very believable, and seem like
the kind of kids you would want to teach.
-There is a sense of camaraderie and a job well done.
-There are continued hints that
Gabriel and Katherine are getting along!!
-I enjoyed the chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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-I heard about the snow in Texas.
How much did you get?
-The pizza looks good!
-A good story to go with it
as Katherine gets her house
in some kind of working order.
-The story flows well, and you
must have had some experience
with coaches and young men
helping with packing and unpacking!
-It is very believable, and seem like
the kind of kids you would want to teach.
-There is a sense of camaraderie and a job well done.
-There are continued hints that
Gabriel and Katherine are getting along!!
-I enjoyed the chapter.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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We got well over 1 inch. School got called off.
LOL Thank you the encouragement.
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That isn't too bad. You are welcome for the encouragement.
Comment from Alli Johnston
Although I do not have the full story as I have just stumbled across this recently, you have such a way of storytelling that I found myself immersed and I feel like I didn't miss anything at all. You are so detailed and captivating as a writer
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Although I do not have the full story as I have just stumbled across this recently, you have such a way of storytelling that I found myself immersed and I feel like I didn't miss anything at all. You are so detailed and captivating as a writer
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thank you the encouragement.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a delightful chapter in your novel. Texans can be so helpful as you have well shown. You show Texas in the best of lights. I lived there at one time and do love the State.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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This is a delightful chapter in your novel. Texans can be so helpful as you have well shown. You show Texas in the best of lights. I lived there at one time and do love the State.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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I do love the state too. We got here by way of the Army. LOL Thank you the encouragement.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love it! Finally Gabriel it's getting Katherine trust. He is a real hero by the way he steps in and takes over the heavy lifting side. I like the humor in this chapter for example here: ""Not sure its official name, but I do have a Mom who likes rufflely things. I do come out of my cave once in a while."
"Sorry, I didn't mean."
He chuckled. "Yes, you did." He tossed a corner to her. "Help me adjust it on that side." After it was on, he motioned to Jordan. "Let's get this mattress on and then we're finished." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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I love it! Finally Gabriel it's getting Katherine trust. He is a real hero by the way he steps in and takes over the heavy lifting side. I like the humor in this chapter for example here: ""Not sure its official name, but I do have a Mom who likes rufflely things. I do come out of my cave once in a while."
"Sorry, I didn't mean."
He chuckled. "Yes, you did." He tossed a corner to her. "Help me adjust it on that side." After it was on, he motioned to Jordan. "Let's get this mattress on and then we're finished." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thank you the encouragement.
