The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "Tequila"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know I am coming in during the middle or even the end of this and I'm sorry I've missed so much. I will only review on what's written here.
We'll I have heard that there may not be enough vaccinations so people will be able to get their second shot. I also heard that this virus is mutating so it now effects children as much as adults. Will it ever stop?
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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I know I am coming in during the middle or even the end of this and I'm sorry I've missed so much. I will only review on what's written here.
We'll I have heard that there may not be enough vaccinations so people will be able to get their second shot. I also heard that this virus is mutating so it now effects children as much as adults. Will it ever stop?
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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I am not sure if it will stop soon, the people who let it go, needs a certain Cota to be reached, sorry for my black humor.
Comment from Judy Lawless
You've done a good job of raising a number of questions about the virus and the vaccines, all questions most of us are asking. The answer to your question: "why it has to be served cold when it's already cold in most of the countries..." is that nowhere in Canada or the US do we have the consistently extreme low temperatures (especially indoors where it would be stored).
I do think that you could improve your writing with more attention to editing before posting. I understand that English isn't your first language, so here are some examples:
1) "Now the world politics it's (are) promising her some (a) big snooze with the new vaccines on the market that are fighting for the title The Best of 2021!"
2) "I just heard the news that Pfizer arrived in the states and the cargo is gps-ed." gps-ed is not an English word. Try, "the cargo is short."
Keep on writing, and reading (that will help you with your English)
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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You've done a good job of raising a number of questions about the virus and the vaccines, all questions most of us are asking. The answer to your question: "why it has to be served cold when it's already cold in most of the countries..." is that nowhere in Canada or the US do we have the consistently extreme low temperatures (especially indoors where it would be stored).
I do think that you could improve your writing with more attention to editing before posting. I understand that English isn't your first language, so here are some examples:
1) "Now the world politics it's (are) promising her some (a) big snooze with the new vaccines on the market that are fighting for the title The Best of 2021!"
2) "I just heard the news that Pfizer arrived in the states and the cargo is gps-ed." gps-ed is not an English word. Try, "the cargo is short."
Keep on writing, and reading (that will help you with your English)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Hi Judy, thank you so much for your review and the corrections:)
Comment from estory
I think this essay speaks of the skepticism that people feel to this rapidly rolled out vaccine. Three months is not enough time to guage effectiveness, or side effects, especially long term ones. We don't even know for how long it will be effective. This could all be a false hope, and a waste of money. Maybe its better to just drink the tequilla. estory
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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I think this essay speaks of the skepticism that people feel to this rapidly rolled out vaccine. Three months is not enough time to guage effectiveness, or side effects, especially long term ones. We don't even know for how long it will be effective. This could all be a false hope, and a waste of money. Maybe its better to just drink the tequilla. estory
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Yup, tequila my scare the Coronella away:)
Comment from GE Parson
Your posting, for me to follow, seemed to
be fragmented - i.e. each sentence did not
seem to compliment one another. Then after talking about the flu shot, you ended up with Tequila - I'm sorry but this just didn't make an sense.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Your posting, for me to follow, seemed to
be fragmented - i.e. each sentence did not
seem to compliment one another. Then after talking about the flu shot, you ended up with Tequila - I'm sorry but this just didn't make an sense.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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I know it's not very clear, I use Tequila as an analogy to the shots:)
Comment from royowen
I think you may be able to write a book on Covid 19 dear girl, you've done a wonderful job on compiling a great list anf the course of the pandemic, entitled "Covid 19, a course and history of the pandemic, well done Iza, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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I think you may be able to write a book on Covid 19 dear girl, you've done a wonderful job on compiling a great list anf the course of the pandemic, entitled "Covid 19, a course and history of the pandemic, well done Iza, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much , Mr. Roy, God willing it might happen:)
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Well done
Comment from Raul1
The cat definitely wants his tequila. I am just only kidding. This is a funny and hilarious poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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The cat definitely wants his tequila. I am just only kidding. This is a funny and hilarious poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your continuous support with this Saga:)
Comment from greyson ernst
where in the world do you people get these picture but and congrats of being 1# script writer and 2# novelist and as always keep writing and stay safe
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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where in the world do you people get these picture but and congrats of being 1# script writer and 2# novelist and as always keep writing and stay safe
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2021
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The pictures are coming from google. You just put funny in front of the picture you need and voila. for example funny pictures with tequila:)
