Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Hi dear Yvette,
This profound and prophetic gem notes that both love and time
are serendipitous and evolutionary assimilations and constellations
converge independently yet lastingly complimentary in silent, subtle
reincarnations and epiphanys. Perfect Pic, for sentiment and theme.
Thanks for sharing, once again, your inner oracle of revelations
and innovative inspirations soar and soothe the psyche ever so
marvelously!
Love, blessings, Ronni

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021

Better Late Than Never... although this late REALLY sucks!! I am SO SORRY for the tardiness here, Beautiful Lady!! :) We managed to sell our house in the midst of all the other stuff right now (helping my mom with handling things after dad's passing and school issues), so I'm CRAZY busy with life! ;) Thanx for your understanding and hopefully things will find an even keel around here... just in time for the March winds, yeah?! Open the sails and let's go!! ;) :) Take care and thanx again! ;) Yvette
P.S. Promise email is next... I saw your wonderful name there when I logged on a little while ago! ;)

reply by Ronni on 26-Jan-2021

Oh wow..FINALLY BACK!!!!!
so glad you are! Understand
how hectic & busy such matters in home life, et.;
can be; so no apologies needed dear friend! Just take
time to slow down a bit...speed is great for running a race...but we mortals are not machines..
so "take 5" in your day at least a few times!!!! Glad your house sale is over. Rest is a patter of pace and priorty. Stay safe.
Love, Ronni

Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

So true, Yvette. :) Love is the essence that stays in your heart, it is what makes you smile with the coming of twilight and kisses you with the dawn's early light. Don't forget those whispers as you go to bed. They will be with you at the break of day. This is a good offering for the Lune Poetry Contest. Thank you for sharing some of your essence. ;)

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

I really just let the muse have this one, Jose... still on a 'down' note when I sat to compose. Thanx so much for all your reviews and support, my firend, and blessings for 2021... all year long! ;) Yvette

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This short poem, when coupled with the picture, has a very romantic aura. It well meets the Lune specifications, and the words flow nicely. It is an excellent contest entry.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thanx for your review, Susan -- always great of you to stop by, my lady! ;) Take care and Happy 2021... all year long! ;) Yvette

Comment from Lucy de Welles

Excellent

So beautiful, Yvette!

"long after time sleeps." Really caught my eye, this one. Read it four times and shook my head. Time sleeping? Wow. Neat image. Really makes the lune powerful.

Lovely ....
Lucy

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

So glad you enjoyed this one, Lucy -- I pretty much just let the pen bleed for the emotions here... a bit of catharsis, I suppose. ;) Thanx for the review, my lady, and Happy 2021... all year long! ;) Yvette

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautiful lune poem and your presentation is fantastic. May your new week be blessed with joy, peace, love and grace.
Patricia

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thanx so much for the awesome review on this shortie, Patricia! ;) Take care and Happy 2021... all year long! ;) Yvette

Comment from aryr

Excellent

Good luck in the Lune Poetry contest, Yvette. This was an amazing utilized way to express your thoughts at a moment in time. It was also a great tribute. It was so well done.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thanx for stopping on on this 'shortie', Alie -- I just let the pen bleed this one... ;) :) Take care over there on the East Coast and Happy 2021... all year long! ;) Yvette

reply by aryr on 14-Jan-2021

Happy New Year all year long Yvette you are very welcome

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello dear Yvette!
Love the emotion found in your well-crafted lune poem.
The older I am, the more I dream.
The more I dream, the longer the whispers ...

Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thanx Beautiful Lady -- I'm gonna at least be caught up by tomorrow some time... okay, so I'm just talking about on here, but it's a start, yeah? LOL!! ;) Keep that big grin on up there!;) Yvette

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Exceptional

Your image is beautiful, YM. Great job with the contest rules--correct syllable count per line. Your image and color scheme pair nicely. I like the way you wrote 'echo on long after time sleeps.' I could see the gentle waves carrying love's whispers forever.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

I'm so very glad this one touched you, Jan, as we both know the well from which the pen drew on this one.... thanx so much for the review and, more importantly for the acknowledgement of the six stars -- still smiling here!! ;) :) Here's wishing a distance from the pain yet a closeness to the memories for the both of us, my lady... ;) Yvette

Comment from Jerome Goldberg

Excellent

Yvette - your lovely lune poem evokes a haunting melody. Looks like you have met the contest requirements. I wish you good fortune in the contest. Stay safe and stay well - Jerry

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Good... was going for haunting or melancholic... thanx for the confirmation and the awesome review, Jerrry, and Happy 2021... all year long! ;) Yvette

Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

It is so true. We never forget those loving words bestowed on us at certain memorable times. It's mostly when we are just lying in bed about to doze off that they buzz around and give us that warm satisfying feeling, again.
A realistic acknowledgment.

Ralf

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2021

Thanx so much for your heartfelt review, Ralf -- they do know how to 'buzz' don't they?! ;) :) Have a great 2021... all year long! ;) Yvette