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Twittering Heights

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Comment from robyn corum
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LIAJ,

Yeah, I heard that all of Trump's social media accounts were cut off, but then I saw on the news late last night that that wasn't really true. His official Presidential account is still active. It's all bizarre. Thanks!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-That is quite a piece of
artwork, John, and a story
to go with it.
-I like the opening with
the play on "Mirror, Mirror
on the Wall!"
-I also like how you end
that part of the story.
-A great ending to the whole
piece, too. Thanks for sharing
it and have a good weekend.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you!
reply by Pam (respa) on 26-Mar-2021
    I guess you saved all of these up, John! You are very welcome.
Comment from Wendy G
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This is a very humorous piece (from my perspective), despite the sadness, and despair and disunity which this man has brought upon his nation. I do pray that your country can soon begin to heal and be restored.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Allezw2
Exceptional
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Gad lad! Why haven't I seen you before? My net, too small? After Wednesday, still wondering why? In a way, I have a feeling it might well have dawned on Der Donald that this time he stepped in doo-doo over his head. Now if the HoR does impeach, and the senate convicts, the only office he might contest will be as a local dog catcher. Since all federal positions would be closed. Whee! Some would-be presidential contenders on the elephant side might like that idea. May I live long enough to seea definitive history of this presidency.
Is it true that if it doesn't kill you, it makes you stronger?
Fantasist

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
    Allez my friend, I am sitting here red-faced that I have taken so long to respond to your wonderful review, and with a sixer to boot.

    The "Donald" Don Don drums are only being heard way off in the distance these days. Thank God!

    Thank you so very much for your most kind review.

    Best
    John
reply by Allezw2 on 26-Mar-2021
    You're quite welcome. Live long and write well, Fantasist as Allezw or Wayne.
Comment from Judy Lawless
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Another great comment on the state of affairs in the USA these days! It's witty and more or less truthful, although I doubt that he'll ever be "flushed from history!" He'll go down in history, but not the way he'd believed!

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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This is great I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
it captured my attention from the start
yes Mr. Man is at the end of his rope, but I fear he's going out destroy something or some one, I take that back he'll have some else to do his dirty work. Like he wanted them to hang the Vice president
Cookie

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you!
reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 26-Mar-2021
    Your very welcome,
    Have a blessed day
    Cookie
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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This is great I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
it captured my attention from the start
yes Mr. Man is at the end of his rope, but I fear he's going out destroy something or some one, I take that back he'll have some else to do his dirty work. Like he wanted them to hang the Vice president
Cookie

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you!
reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 26-Mar-2021
    Your very welcome,
    Have a blessed day
    Cookie
Comment from Jaime Deagle
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I found the character to be interesting and engaging. The story seemed natural. The character draws you into the story. The dialogue sounded natural. It was an easy read. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
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I will review this objectively only. Structurally your flash fiction is fine. Although, it is not really a flash ending. I suppose you went with humor ending.

imagining himself as the most powerful man on {earth}; before being flushed from history

- I think: Earth, as I assume you mean the planet's name.


 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2021
    Thank you Lancelot for your objective review. I made the correction you recommended and I thank you for spotting that.

    Best
    John
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Ha, ha, ha funny offering for the night, and I love the rhythm: "Twitter, Twitter on the wall, who is the smartest of them all?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
    Thank you!