Circus Act
22 Syllables6 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Very creative poem. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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I like how you structured this poem. This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Very creative poem. I like your poem. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Sometimes more seem to be discarded than are kept, no? :) :) A fun offering for the Naani contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Sometimes more seem to be discarded than are kept, no? :) :) A fun offering for the Naani contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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You are so right about 5he discarding issue. That's why the backspace and delete buttons on my computer are so overworked!!
Comment from LisaMay
I like this - it has a sense of energy and entertainment with the trapeze motif. Using creativity to make judicious choices about what to use, what to leave out, is the framework of poetry-making - the ABC's.
That's a very appropriate image choice too. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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I like this - it has a sense of energy and entertainment with the trapeze motif. Using creativity to make judicious choices about what to use, what to leave out, is the framework of poetry-making - the ABC's.
That's a very appropriate image choice too. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. A writer's life is a wobbly juggle!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very effective use of the words "Trapeze" and "Tumble." Paints a great picture of the letters swirling around in our minds, until the right ones finally make it to the page.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Very effective use of the words "Trapeze" and "Tumble." Paints a great picture of the letters swirling around in our minds, until the right ones finally make it to the page.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Exactly the picture I wanted to portray.
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You are welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
This was fun! I couldn't help but think of my granddaughter in her new tumbling classes - she's four. The way we write, sometimes, does kind of look and feel like that, doesn't it? *smile* Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This was fun! I couldn't help but think of my granddaughter in her new tumbling classes - she's four. The way we write, sometimes, does kind of look and feel like that, doesn't it? *smile* Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Letters are always tumbling in my head, all they have to do is land properly
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Creative trapeze
Letters tumble with ease
Some are discarded
Poetry ABC's - Nice tweak between geometry and literature:) thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Creative trapeze
Letters tumble with ease
Some are discarded
Poetry ABC's - Nice tweak between geometry and literature:) thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2021
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Thanks for your review. Geometry was never my strong suit so glad you saw it that way.
