Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Our attitude is most important when talking to others and sometimes we can upset others without realising it Patricia, a fine acrostic here.

Just one suggestion here:

I think you mean (others) in the last line Patricia.

Love Dolly x

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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

You are right about the bullying. Karma and fate also come to mind. God allows only what He will and takes care of the rest. This is very well done acrostic

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Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

A very good commentary on this verse from Proverbs. Good use of the acrostic form and some very good advice for all of us. We should always treat others as we would want to be treated.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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reply by Anne Johnston on 08-Jan-2021

You are welcome

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

You're right, the ones that are full of themselves are often the manipulators. They prey on the weak, defenseless to boost their agenda's, their overinflated egos. Often destroying anyone in their way.

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Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This should have been an acrostic poetry contest entry. You said some very true things here, Very nice job. Thank you for sharing. stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.

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Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Patricia, This is a very well written and very true acrostic poem you have penned about pride. You used great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing my friend. love and blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

this is a really really good poem nice job you should enter acrostic and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy 2021


sincerely Greyson Ernst


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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2021

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